The boy who killed God - An Epic Fantasy LitRPG
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Description
In Elysia, your fate is sealed by the amount of mana you receive from The Divine.If you are blessed with a lot, you can use magic to create all the comforts one can dream of.If not, you have to work your whole life.
But what happens if one person siphons all of The Divine's mana?"The boy who killed God" is an epic fantasy LitRPG spanning 2 continents, 5 nations, and a ton of world-building.The trilogy is now complete and will soon be published as part of the Apocosmos Mutliverse (https://www.amazon.com/Apocosmos-Multiverse/e/B099QXGFGJ)
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Dimitrios Gkirgkiris
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 126
- Views
- 26,639
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- moulder666Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Rated as of chapter 2. Clean and well-written - this should be damn good. Love a dark and bloody start to kick things off in style.
Will adjust/expand on the review as the story grows. Hard to tell so far apart from the fact that this is written by somebody who knows what they're doing. - deus vultRoyal Road★★★ 3.0the premise of the story is that there exists a system and a god. the god is... weird. a greater deity or something. he gives out mana to his followers, but it's only a limited amount. everyone has a limited amount of magic almost the same as spending their lifespan, or life energy. they spend it and it goes away. I guess. but they don't die in the end. which should make anyone hesitant at wasting any of it. which makes me wonder why is it so great when you can just grow stronger and have as much as you want as long as your class is high enough. usually classes increase lifespan rather than the other way around. maybe it can give you a boost but that's that imo. it made me irritated but it's not as bad as the actual premise.
there's a system but it doesn't play a huge role. we don't get to see any stats or skills. the writing itself is also subpar. I struggle a bit to care and keep up with which character is which at the moment. it's not very comprehensive, and the goings of back and forth from two mcs is a little annoying, changing prespective all of the time is not for me specifically.
*spoiler* - premise
the divine is murdered by a child. a child of all things. if it had been possessed by something, okay. so it's murdered by a demon. somewhat acceptable. but no, it's a child. you're supposed to be all wise and all knowing or something. why die in such an idiotic manner? don't you have control over the mana after you give it out? how come a greater deity from before time with an endless amount of mana be murdered from a ritual in the first place? didn't you take precautions? seriously.
what kind of deity would die like that? by a child? can a child even carry so much mana? makes zero sense. but that's the stupid premise of the story. so, yeah. everyone dies or something. the rest is becoming even more stupid. you hear them saying "we survived the archeangles slaughter, let's get rid of their bodies." - yes, the angle's bodies. said the children. excuse me what the - JavadRoyal Road★ 0.5Grammar is ok. The story itself was really meh and I couldn't bring myself to finish.
Especially the part after the premise happens. Angels slaughter everyone and main characters start doing some really incomprehensible things. Children doing that makes no sense.
In any case, I dropped it as it felt like a total waste of time.