The Bag
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A short story where a dwarven wizard, fuelled by greed, makes a magical bag to carry all her riches. However, it seems she has tapped into something far more sinister.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- smokeebredd
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 170
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Ignoring the fact that our MC does not decide to test the bag prior to using it, the story is one that is simple and a bit funny at times. For reasons unknown the MC does not actually try to solve the problem of her creation and that remains one of the biggest plot holes. The idea was good, but the issues with the plot really hold it back because as it continues it gets harder and harder to maintain the suspension of disbelief.
- Pandamonium210Royal Road★★★★ 3.5This is a good read!
Smokeebredd has a great ability to bring us quickly into the character's world. You love them and want to see them succeed that until the nasties get in... Is it their fault or is it something we all can relate to?
I really enjoy smokeebredd's work and definitely needs more people reading it!