The Author's Character Development System [ACDS]

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

KittenSniper

• 24. Intro to exploiting the hell out of my magic system... for scientists and engineers.
  Jun 22, 2023
• 23. The first step to being a proper Shounen protagonist.
  Jun 15, 2023
• 22. Who needs friends when you can have loyal, undying minions?
  Jun 1, 2023
• 21. Manipulating the MC is a job reserved for villains, romantic interests, and the author.
  May 27, 2023
• 20. A dance is a power play between two self-proclaimed equals.
  May 25, 2023
• 19. No secret base is complete without a pizza delivery.
  May 20, 2023
• 18. Blackmailing a black market broker into being your friend 101.
  May 18, 2023
• 17. I am a warrior trained by the wisdom of a hundred web novels.
  May 13, 2023
• 16. An idiot once said only terrible people manipulate others. Fortunately, I'm a terrible person.
  May 11, 2023
• 15. Hiding trump cards is an arrogant way to lose a winnable battle.
  May 6, 2023
• 14. If an explosion doesn't solve your problem, you didn't explode it enough.
  May 4, 2023
• 13. The first dungeon being harder than expected is a right of passage.
  Apr 28, 2023
• 12. I wanted to be a writer, so why am I waking up early on the weekend?
  Apr 26, 2023
• 11. Great authors create magic systems they can exploit the hell out of.
  Apr 20, 2023
• 10. I'm not weak, I'm statistically challenged.
  Apr 15, 2023
• 9. Raising the dead and other ethical behaviors.
  Apr 13, 2023
• 8. There comes a time in every artist’s life when they must dance with their demons.
  Apr 8, 2023
• 7. Introducing myself to the main character while wearing a bathrobe is a test of my godliness.
  Apr 6, 2023
• 6. So I may have messed up by writing my girlfriend as a character...
  Apr 1, 2023
• 5. Here’s a brief introduction to some important characters on the first day of classes.
  Apr 1, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• Thornwell NebullaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Overall: Personally, this is one of my favourite series on royalroad. Its basically a hidden gem. The Mc is very relatable( that probably says more about it me) while I love how much depth the mc has, I would be lying if I said I didn't like the setting and plot more.(only a tiny bit more)
  Grammar: perfect. Never noticed a single issue/error
  Style: its rather simple and easy to follow.
  Story: The selling point of this series. The way events play out is so amazing, I sometimes wonder how long did it take the author to outline the series.
  I never thought I would enjoy sci-fi, fantasy, game elements, and a just a bunch of different genres mix up together but in a coherent manner. Its not messy at all.
  Not only that, the way the plot moves forward is not predictable.
  Character: deadass my favourite Mc on RR. I need to read more to see if he would be my fav mc in fiction. What makes him so likeable? His ego maybe, how much he prepares, but also how human he is. He can be badass at times, but also make small dumb mistakes, or acknowledge he is an inferior.
  Oh, since the mc is an author, I suppose when reading it, I tend to go like, "yeahhhhh. Same."
• danlinRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  An author is inserted into his novel, but the story is a bunch of his drafts smashed together. I recommend reading to chapter 4 before deciding to drop. It's definitely above average. The characterization is its strong point. Most characters seem like real people and I personally like the personality of the author. He is cynical and a bit jaded from being mocked by people for being a webnovel author. His humor is also pretty good. Although there is no dialog until like chapter 2 or 3 (the chapters are decently long) it does flow smoothly once characters start talking. The only part I don't like is that "Yessir" was used like 3 times and every single time except the first time it felt out of place. Just use "Sure" or some other form of adknowledgement. There is always a good explanation of the main character's logic and everything that he does makes a good amount of sense. The world does as well. I have a minor complaint that is a spoiler but it doesn't impact the story that much so I will only say: Spoiler His reaction to Jessica was a bit too dramatic. The mc's goal is understandable but I don't like how a ROB gave him that goal. There is a ROB in this story that and makes me annoyed but I can look past it. It's not the worst ROB ever but I hate most ROBs so... Grammar was good but there were probably some things I missed so I'm taking off half a star. *wink* It's a decent story that I reccomend giving a read.
  Reposting this review because it got deleted for not following advanced review rules for some reason :/