The antagonist's daughter

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Description

Kana had partaken in the design of a certain RPG game. However, right after its release she mysteriously loses consciousness.

By the time she regained her senses, she finds herself in the middle of an assassination, while being on the way to an interview in the body of a background game character whose father is the main antagonist (to be?)…with the crown prince no less!

What will she, Charlotte Ionesse, do? Will she do nothing and wait for death while hoping this is a dream? Or struggle and escape?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Crimsal

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(3)

RunnerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Story and writting is very good. Some minor grammar errors that are easy to overlook. If the plot summary interests you, give this a try. It's pretty close to how the story goes. Only thing not mentioned is the body of the backgroud character she 'jumps' into is a 8 year old daughter.
phils2gewdRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The tone of the story reminds me of the Jap LN "I Reincarnated into an Otome Game as a Villainess With Only Destruction Flags…" not that it's a bad thing mind you.
Would recommend if you are looking for a light hearted and a fun read.
Bit lazy to give a full review, but my main criticism so far is that the Chapters are a bit short. Despite having the chapter numbers, i feel like I don't really know the story well enough to know which direction it's heading in and I don't feel connected to any of the characters - and the reason for that is probably because the story is in it's early phase at the moment.
Regardless, keep up the good work!
0989466Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I have only read up to chapter 15 so I have not read enough to fully understand the story.
That being said what I have read so far is not that great. My main problem being the characters. I would hope that 15 chapters is enough to fully flesh out at least the main character but so far she has not been. I don't have the slightest clue what her goals/motivations are. The story is just mindlessly moving forward with events that happen in most reincarnation stories. Her personality is also very plain and structured(not very funny or appealing). And the only given reason for her saintly personality is because for her grandfather's training(the author 'told' me that, the characters background hasn't been 'shown' ) . The author also has a tendency to just plain skip dialogue which results in no development of any other characters. I can't name a single character that is not 2d.
I like the style, gives me the feeling of reading a web novel.
Grammar is great, my accomplishments in English goes as far as high school so I have no right to judge. (my Grammer ass)
The story is a little predictable, but the problems in it stem form the characters.
Overall the story is ok, good for passing time but not so much in other aspects. I will stick around for a couple more chapters but I doubt there will be any changes. Also one main problem that this story has is 'shown not tell'. I'm fine with a flash back that shows us events up telling us "the two started chatting about meaningless things" does nothing but move the story forward. Anyway...
No hate, keep writing, peace...