the anomaly named black

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Description

Renvoy Black was your average, edgy, paranoid, not entirely incompetent teenager who hated to submit to anyone or anything. An avid reader of fantasy and LitRPG novels, Renvoy led a relatively calm, ordinary life. Until he didn’t.After the world around him disintegrated into blue particles one object at a time, he and the rest of humanity must survive the whims of an unpredictable System. A System determined to see Renvoy destroyed.

Deemed an anomaly and left for dead by the system in a sealed pocket dimension, Renvoy found help from the most unexpected source: darkness, now stranded in an unfamiliar world of fantasy Renvoy must now use his wits and knowledge to survive and forge himself the ultimate tool for his revenge, a System.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Death-69

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 104
Views: 36,216

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Community Reviews(10)

Alto WatsonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a faced paced and creative litrpg journey. The character development is good as it explores interesting concepts and platitudes. The fantasy themes thoughout are genuine and compelling, and drive you on through the narrative.
5/5 and I hope to see more from this author. The dedication demonstrated within these 32 chapters is truely inspiring to see.
DemonGOdRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great story, loved how it all started and Naming sense for the characters..You presented your ideas and thoughts really well on the paper ,you are such a natural storyteller. I just love your writing. .I genuinely appreciate your help in coming up with such good stories and presenting them in such a great sequence.Some people think that writing on computers is easy. But I know how difficult it is to come up with ideas and turn them into meaningful and interesting content. Never give up, bro!.So far I know you’re blessed with a creative mind and this profession best suits you, brother. All you need is more practice to write, I guess.
ObIivionRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really like this story it is a very unique take on the very popular system apocalypse genre which starts with one the main character black being rejected by the system.
I thought I may as well put a spoiler warning even though you find out after a few chapters but black creates his own system and we follow this young system take root in the world showing the boons it grants. We also see that this comes with it's own problems mainly bugs and people who won't embrace the system.
Style: Okay so the novel is written well in such a manner that leaves us asking questions and wanting to know more than what we can infer from the text without telling us obviously.
Story: So like I said before I love the idea behind the story which is extremely unique and I've never seen such a thing before. It's world is interesting and everyone's actions make logical sense.
Grammar: There are very few mistakes that I have seen which understandable as there are bound to be mistakes when writing so much and those that have been reported have been very quickly corrected.
Character: The characters are all interesting and I've enjoyed all the POVs I have seen fr both the strong and the weak
Overall the story has lots of potential which is being delivered upon and I've only seen the story improve from the first chapter with an adequate amount of words being uploaded.
Shi_kyuRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I personally love the story and how new and unique the ideas that are presented in this amazing story. This is likely the best story I have ever read wit deep characters and a interesting plot. I feel a personally connection to all the characters because of how relatable they are. Iss is great to see all these amazing this every story needs presented in one exceptional package this was overall an amazing read and I can't wait for more. I love this story and this will forever go down as one of my favorite LN I have ever read
I personally love the story and how new and unique the ideas that are presented in this amazing story. This is likely the best story I have ever read wit deep characters and a interesting plot. I feel a personally connection to all the characters because of how relatable they are. Iss is great to see all these amazing this every story needs presented in one exceptional package this was overall an amazing read and I can't wait for more. I love this story and this will forever go down as one of my favorite LN I have ever read
Solo-rickRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I would recommend it to my friend ( already did tho) it's so interesting, I like how the author updated it every day (although I have work) the is what I read when I'm bored, on my lunch break, eating breakfast, in my free time etc. Although I just started reading it I like it
Star sunRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I've been watching and reading this story for a while now, just decided to make an account because I want to leave a review.
While rough at the beginning it gets better in the later chapers, I'm glad I stayed and read this story.
Overall: a good and enjoyable read.
Stellar Great EmperorRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This was a pretty good read: a really interesting plot, good characters building and lots of others good points. Some few points still needs to be polished but the overall thing is pretty good. There's only 20+ chapters right now but I think the author is pretty motivated about his novel and will continue to update it.
I strongly reccomand it!
old boomerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I've been searching for a story like this for weeks! A system apocalypse in a fantasy world from the pov of the system? I've never seen something like that, all these elements come together to form something very unique and interesting to read.
The perfect combination of what I love.
Absolutely love it I hope the author doesn't drop it.
This has the potential to be something Great.
woomooRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It is good the plot and I overall like it so far so I'm hoping for more chapters so work hard the character is also very noice I like his background and the personality and the story is unique the prologue really reeled me in so I hope you continue your story the character is what I like the most and how it talks about darkness following him and I can relate how black is my favorite color so yeah you should make the story so more people can relate to it cuz I like an Mc with I can relate to make the Mc op and keep the story on track so you don't lose any readers another tip would be make the words more cooler and you can add supporting characters that help the Mc grow which would be useful cuz Some people like supporting characters and also and don't lack on your villains create a cool background story for them and the villain could turn into a supporter for the mc or the villain dies due to the mc so there are many outcomes so try your best and creating good characters and the story is unique so continue with the and don't go off track
chestnutriceeeeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The anomaly named black had been a total blast to read with each and every chapter being better than the last. The unique story and splendid characters blends to make a very enjoyable tale.
Style:
The weakest point first, the style of the story is lacking in the initial chapters. The formatting is slightly wonky and there are some missed capitalizations here and there. The way the scenes are described and played out could use some more detail in the beginning.
Everything keeps getting better in the story, though. From the minor syntax mistakes to the formatting and even the details, I found myself smiling at every new chapter after seeing the author get better at their game too and am sure this will continue ahead. I am really looking forward to seeing how it goes!
Grammar:
Not a native speaker but there was nothing glaringly wrong, just some mistakes here and there.
Story:
The best and the most unique part of The anomaly names black is the story. A very unique outlook on things that I am sure many people have not seen before. I absolutely adored the concept and was on the edge of my seat as things were revealed. Saying anything much would be spoiling a great experience, but it is more than worth going for with the story alone.
Characters:
The characters are great. Though stiff, I like the interactions, and though unexplored, they seem very believable. The story is one that wouldn't work well without the characters so they are the most important aspect of things and I find the author to be nailing them for now.
Overall:
It is still rough and could use a lot of work, especially in the earlier chapters, but that doesn't deter from the story being pretty unique and fun. I am looking forward to it!