The Adventures of Nick Cage

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Description

What would happen if an evil genius gets superpowers and instead of using them to take over the world decides his best option is to hide the fact that he has powers and instead just try to make tons of money instead and live a life of luxury? How far will he go to hide his powers? What will happen when he can't hide them anymore and is forced to use them for *shudders* """"good""""?Though this story has the harem tag any woman the mc meets will be romanced one at a time, though in the end it will most likely end up as a harem in a sense.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Hokonoso

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 262
Views: 181,733

Chapters(38 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

AssmdxdRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
thank i like this novel
nice story, look good but i really want to read MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Gamer-samaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
please make this an grand awsome harem with many adventure and super badass mc not op very much
kay.lensonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
this novel is so funny that i want to read it again and again and the characters are so lovable!...
just cant wait for next update....
ForsakenRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Warning!A little Spoiler(ish)
I love how you mixed every ff types in your work! Xianxia,gaming(ish),Fantasy,Summoning, Harem and a lot more! The chapters are quite satisfying but its just that some characters donthave enough..lets say background and they were introduced simultaneously which makes them a lil hard to remember. Overall I enjoyed it so far and am exepecting for more!
deus991127Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
nice story, look good but i really want to read MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FaerNCRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I do see potential in the story, but your grammar is less than satisfactory. There are no spelling mistakes, but your clause and syntax is just horrible. To begin with, your clauses are way too long.
Prologue
'It must also be noted that stage 1 of evolution was just the beginning was it only took 19 years for the world to realize that children born from a super would become supers on their 18th birthday without fail regardless if only one parent or both are supers'
It would be better like:
'It must also be noted that stage 1 of evolution was just the beginning. It only took 19 years for the world to realize that all children born from supers would also become supers on their 18th birthday, regardless of whether or not both parents are supers.'
Chapter 4
'Fortunately Nick left Johnny out of the link so as not to confuse him. Unfortunately he freaked out when he was Ted and ended up swatted away like a fly confirming Nick’s fears that Ted was indeed gaining power from all the werewolves in the entire world as the only one who should be able to swat his brother away like that is Mr. Absolute and he is currently busy keeping Vlad together, which by the way he is doing a good job as Vlad is already in his zone'
Better version:
'Fortunately, Nick left Johnny out of the link so as to not confuse him. However, he freaked out when he was Ted, and ended up swatted away like a fly. This confirmed Nick’s fears that Ted was, indeed, gaining power from all the werewolves in the entire world, as the only one who should be able to swat his brother away like that is Mr. Absolute, and he is currently busy keeping Vlad together, which, by the way, he is doing a good job at as Vlad is already in his zone.' (This is actually still pretty bad, but to improve it more I will have to completely restructure the sentences)
Full stops, commas, and some word switching makes all the difference
As for style, you are too straight forward explaining things when you explain things. Just bluntly stat