The Adventures of Albert Timmons, Engineer Extraordinaire

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

Dee Blackshear

• Episode  41  Home Safe
  Dec 24, 2023
• Episode  40 General Carr’s Plan
  Dec 18, 2023
• EPISODE 39  Trial Run
  Dec 11, 2023
• Episode.  38   Behind the Metal Door
  Dec 4, 2023
• Episode  37  Captain Jack
  Nov 27, 2023
• Episode 36  Tragic News
  Nov 20, 2023
• Episode 35 Japanese reception
  Nov 13, 2023
• The Green Stones Adventure #3 Episode 34  Albert returns
  Nov 6, 2023
• Episode 33 Going Home
  Sep 18, 2023
• Episode 32 Celebration
  Sep 11, 2023
• Episode 31 Rebellion
  Sep 4, 2023
• Episode 30  Plans
  Oct 6, 2023
• Episode 29 Finishing
  Aug 21, 2023
• Episode 28 Captive
  Aug 14, 2023
• Episode 27  Design
  Aug 14, 2023
• Episode 26 Workshop
  Aug 7, 2023
• Episode 25 Metallica Presentation
  Aug 7, 2023
• Episode 24 Meeting the Emperor
  Jul 31, 2023
• Japan,   Episode 23 Arrival
  Jul 31, 2023
• Episode 22 End of the Voyage
  Jul 17, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Evelyn AdelbergRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The premise is there, the steampunk vibes are there, the characters are well flashed-out. The only thing that stops this from being a 5 star is the grammar and slightly clunky flow.
  It is by no means illegible, but all the positive stuff that I just mentiomed does struggle to balance out the flow at times. I wish I could give some piece of advice on how to improve that, but I'm afraid there isn't a simple solution. It's not the kind of thing a second pass would fix, but neither does this need a full rewrite. Maybe editing a few sentences here and there would help?
  That veing said, the steampunk atmosphere really stand out in this one. Everything cog and piston power machine is alive. It moves and breathes, and is greasy and moving. You can almost feel the ship breathing with its metal guts as we discover it along with the MC.
  TLDR: if you're a fan of fleshed out steampunk that's more than just visual aesthetics, this one is for you.
  🍎 [4/100]