The Adventures of Albert Timmons, Engineer Extraordinaire

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

Dee Blackshear

• Episode 21 Trial Run
  Jul 17, 2023
• Episode 20 Rendezvous
  Jul 10, 2023
• Episode 19  Onboard
  Jul 10, 2023
• Episode 18 Arriving at San Francisco
  Jul 3, 2023
• Episode 17   Plot Foiled
  Jul 3, 2023
• Episode 16  Sneak Attack
  Jun 26, 2023
• Episode 15  Train Ride
  Jun 26, 2023
• Episode 14    Catching the train.
  Jun 19, 2023
• Episode 13    Protection
  Jun 19, 2023
• Episode 12   Intrigue
  Jun 12, 2023
• Episode 11   Attack
  Jun 12, 2023
• Episode 10  An Invitation
  Jun 5, 2023
• Episode 9   A Favor
  Jun 5, 2023
• Episode 8  Help arrives
  May 29, 2023
• Episode 7  Caught
  May 29, 2023
• Episode 6 Answers finally
  May 22, 2023
• Episode 5   Exploring
  May 22, 2023
• Episode 4   A few answers
  May 16, 2023
• Episode 3  Captain Caesar Napoleon
  May 15, 2023
• Episode 2   Albert meets Tattoo and Burly Man
  May 9, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Evelyn AdelbergRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The premise is there, the steampunk vibes are there, the characters are well flashed-out. The only thing that stops this from being a 5 star is the grammar and slightly clunky flow.
  It is by no means illegible, but all the positive stuff that I just mentiomed does struggle to balance out the flow at times. I wish I could give some piece of advice on how to improve that, but I'm afraid there isn't a simple solution. It's not the kind of thing a second pass would fix, but neither does this need a full rewrite. Maybe editing a few sentences here and there would help?
  That veing said, the steampunk atmosphere really stand out in this one. Everything cog and piston power machine is alive. It moves and breathes, and is greasy and moving. You can almost feel the ship breathing with its metal guts as we discover it along with the MC.
  TLDR: if you're a fan of fleshed out steampunk that's more than just visual aesthetics, this one is for you.
  🍎 [4/100]