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An author who has no idea what he's doing.

Read on as he regale's a tale of two siblings, whose antics inadvertantly make waves that threaten to drown all those around them.

Credit for the synopsis and the story itself goes to my good friend The Sexy Warrior Poet.

I'm just an add-on for posting.

There will be weekly updates. Most likely. Probably. Hopefully.

We'll see.

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SpiritLink112Royal Road

★★★★ 3.5

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It's a funny light story and the characters are pretty fun and consistent though there were times when I thought 'Wait, who had that name?' or something like that for a minor character being mentioned. The plot is definitely more random, but definitely knows how to keep you guessing. There are minor things like spelling/grammar errors of course but it's mostly minor. It's sometimes surprisingly descriptive for a story of this type, but it's definitely a good thing. The story may have it's shortcomings, but I'd say it was a fun read and keep me entertained for a few days.
Then there is the ending. It was definitely interesting but I wish they did a little different with the MC's being more prominent. This whole thing also feels a little pointless without a sequel as the ending is fairly inconclusive, and it's either eight months in the making or not coming. Most likely the second, though.

AlcaronRoyal Road

★★ 2.0

The story is a lighthearted and fun read, with equally fun characters, who just feel alive.
However, at several points in the story I moved to the previous chapter, because I thought I had hit the next chapter button at least twice.
It feels as if entire chapters are missing. Severel plotlines open up, never to be mentioned again. Characters are introduced and never appear agian.
And somtimes a character asks a question or makes a comment about lines in conversations that did not happen.
Also, the story moves around the MCs but isn't influenced by them. Every single major plotline after the "tutorial" is solved by the NPCs of that plotline, with our MCs giving inconsequential support or at best making the last hit.
Finally, the finale is strait off bad. 80% of it followes the view of charaters that had maybe a paragaph of introduction, if at all. Only to come to an end that feels incredebly forced.
However, I will admit that the finale could serve as a good introduction to the characters should there be a second book. Also the forced ending could be easily explaind in said second book.

The Adventure of Two Mildly Sociopathic Siblings in a Poorly Designed VRMMORPG World

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