Tales of Reverie

Self-Published

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Description

Short stories of varying lengths about various things.Among other things a prisoner born as a slave faces an opportunity to escape, the monstrosity that is the tooth fairy, an encounter with a parasitic being and lots more!

There is possibility for some of them to be extended as well, if you want that just say the word!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Shrike Law

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Views: 3,469

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

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★★★★ 3.5
There's a bunch of tasty stories in there...
Unfortunately, the way they are written makes it hard for me to read.
Style: It might have been great if not for the repetition. And also a lot of suspens or tension filled scenes are rushed. They had so much potential in them. Plus there's a lot of telling at the beginning instead of showing.
It got much better with the last three chapters, however I struggled with the earlier ones.
Story: I find the stories great, creatives and fun to read. But again. There are part that are rushed and I'm unable to really enjoy them.
Grammar: There's some mistakes with tenses, misspelling and punctuation. Sometimes the story is in past tense then it switches to present than re-switch to past. It's really confusing. There are some parts where the ponctuation is a bit confusing too.The author should check their chapter before posting.
Characters: I find most characters enjoyable. Even though there are some that really pissed me by how dumb they seemed. Plus some interactions felt force and rushed. But it's only for one or two stories.
Overall: There's great potential here.
The author should however make sure to edit their chapter a litter bit before posting. Great things that could be enjoyed are wasted.