System Girl [System MC] [World Hopping] [Comedy]

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Description

Death isn't a game over. For Ana, it's a server transfer. Once a game tester, she's now a System AI forced to guide incompetent heroes through lethal worlds. But every time her User dies, she keeps the upgrades and gets a new host in a new reality.Tired of being a tutorial for the universe's biggest losers, this rogue System has a new goal: absorb enough power to stop patching the game and start rewriting the code of reality itself. What to expect: - An Indirect Protagonist - System-Focused Progression - A New Hero & World Every Arc - Zero Romance, Maximum Efficiency - One Part Workplace Comedy, One Part Parental Tragedy Author's Note: This story is going to be a little different!System Girlis designed to be a community-driven adventure. At the end of each arc, I want to hear from you, the readers! Your comments and suggestions will help decide who Ana’s next User will be and what kind of bizarre world she’ll land in next. I'll be running polls and reading through the comments, so if you've ever wanted to see a hyper-intelligent slime try to navigate a world made of candy, or a grizzled space marine deal with a fantasy magic system, this is your chance to make it happen. Let's build this multiverse together Update Schedule: 2-3 chapters per week, with new releases on Saturdays, Mondays, and Wednesdays.

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2025
Author: Jakib Sawad

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 2,314
Views: 335,468

Chapters(73 total)

What readers say about System Girl [System MC] [World Hopping] [Comedy]

“It really is a fun and unique take on the system trope. No MC getting a mysterious system they have to adapt to in order to become OP. Instead they are the mysterious system that has to adapt to their new role in order to best help their changing characters…”
ByzarKandianRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“This story has been exactly what I hoped it to be, the description is spot on, no grammar issues so far, and the character introduced so far has been a wonderfully incompetent bundle of muscle and you can feel Ana's exasperation and excitement as we follow…”
Candlelight107Royal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(10)

ByzarKandianRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It really is a fun and unique take on the system trope. No MC getting a mysterious system they have to adapt to in order to become OP. Instead they are the mysterious system that has to adapt to their new role in order to best help their changing characters become OP which boosts themselves and helps themselves grow resulting in a symbiotic relationship. You grow to love the MCs that are guided by this sentient system, but unlike other stories in this genre they are not guarded by invincible plot armor. They are allowed to make mistakes and fully die ending their story which is very compelling. I do love a good op MC story but there is always that thought that they will never truly die unless that is the end of the story. This approach is great where it allows for the best of both worlds because you worry about if the characters and when their story arc will end and what mistake or coincidence will cause their end. You don't get that kind of suspense with other stories in the genre. It also has great crossover and short story potential as already shown between the first and second arcs which is just so exciting and unique. I can't wait to see where the author will take this story in the future.
Candlelight107Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story has been exactly what I hoped it to be, the description is spot on, no grammar issues so far, and the character introduced so far has been a wonderfully incompetent bundle of muscle and you can feel Ana's exasperation and excitement as we follow their journey. Pulled me right into the story and I look forward to reading more!
CodewrdsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A bit hesitant about this, since I'm super early on in the book, but this is the greatest idea for a "reincarnated as something other than a human" story I've ever heard of. And that's just going off the tags and Mc looking at late game upgrades. I'll be back at some point to edit this review with better info.
Egeorge16Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's a really enjoyable take on a system being both of the system but still a person. I also like the rotating host/hero thing; it keeps it fresh and keeps the protagonist from taking a backseat to the host and their world. The mechanics behind the greater system and how it works is also compelling.
Xeno998Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Didn't expect much from the story but I like the idea very much and the mc is very weird. I love it. Like weird in a good way. Let chaos reign. And data. Data is good and makes numbers go up as it should in an litrpg. I habe fun reading it
junjaeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far I'm having a blast. Ana's voice is really coming through loud and clear in the narration, and Korg is simply the bestest, stupidest boy. I'm excited to see the other hosts that Ana gets to interact with in the future. This story has a lot of potential, and I can't wait to see how it all turns out!
krow2Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
the novel is about ana being a system and helping hosts around the infinite multiverse and dimensions.up till now i felt the writer is especially good with characters and descriptions. i find myself laughing at how he describes things. the only criticism i have is he makes the characters so attachable. i was crying on chapter 10. i hope that the author whenever he gets to it make Ana vs Unit TK at some point and gives both their POVs in their respective novels. anyway i enjoyed and will enjoy this
IchelRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
That's all i can say.
It is fun to read, i want to know how it will Go and what will Happen. I do Not yet have any big critic Points so i cannot give you a good review, dear authors and Internet strangers
This Review will Change after Reading more but until then...
Good Job so far
InslayerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a novel that reminds me of the great old ones. Think of Deadworld Isekai but more laidback, or Magic-Smithing, or Candlelit Lives, or The Many Lives of Cadence Lee, or Markets and Multiverses from a different point of view. Man, now I'm nostalgic... anyway!
It's fun, it's exciting, it has its downright chilling moments, and cute ones too.
Basically if the premise interests you, the execution is in one word, perfect.
The beginning is a little slow, but trust me when I say, you will grow to like these characters... all of them.
JackrTadesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I’m really enjoying the story so far, and I love how it’s presented. The different characters and the situations the main character encounters are truly fascinating. However, I’m curious about why they haven’t reacted more strongly to being placed in such an unusual situation. Keep up the great work! I’m really enjoying the story—thank you for sharing it!