Super Villain System[Super Villain Litrpg]

Self-Published

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Description

Something is really,reallywrong with the world.

Beyond the eldritch horror encroaching from beyond and the invasive species of man-eating aliens, something about the Federation of Man just isn't right.

Superheroes aren't much of heroes anymore, and super villains... well, they just aren'tsuper. Sure, they have the power to tangle with the best of them, but where's thepizzazz!Where's theI.Tfactor?

The Federation of Man is desperately lacking apropersupervillain.

Luckily for them, there might just be one on the rise.

Luke wasfinewith being a cashier, watching Villainy be made a mockery of by amateurs.

But after being robbed, electrocuted, robbed, beaten and then robbedagainall in the same week some screws might've gotten knocked loose. Because the state of Villainy isnotfine, and Luke's bored, crazy and stupid enough to believe he can change it.

And apparently, some mystic jackass named the Architect thinks so too, planting a system on Luke that only wants one thing from him.

Evil... doneright!

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What to expect:

Super Villain System is an action-packed Superhero LitRPG set in a post-apocalyptic world with a semi-dystopian dynamic and a whole bunch of chaos to be had. The MC is a bit crazy but endearing and I hope you all enjoy the neat side characters who pepper Luke's adventure to thetop!

Includes:

Weak-strong MC

Futuristic and Apocalyptic Superhero world

Wild superpowers

A villainous lead who is maybe not downright evil but definitely morally questionable

A whole bunch of mystery about the world as a whole and the superpowers that run it

Chapter length:

Ranges from 4-6k

Schedule is MWF for Australians which will probably be a day before for most of you.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: vVip3rzzz

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Rating: 4.7/ 5.0
Followers: 1,390
Views: 166,341

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Community Reviews(10)

tuli5454Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Love the premise and the first chapters really move the story along
post apocalyptic world - check
superheroes - check
system - check
Add to that a broken skill geared toward versatility and humor and villain archetype upgrades that may affect the MC's behavior and we got something brewing here.
I will be following this story for sure
BROBOTICUSRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Its a fun story well written and funny.
The chqp in the beginning are bit of a slog to read through but afterwards fun fun fun. Not a dull moment seriously
Like it has some real potential if the story keeps Goin the way it is so far has.
So yeah read it
shimari7Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is shaping up to be an absolutely fantastic story. I love me a good superhero story, not enough of those out there, and so far this does everything I want one to do. The little we've seen of the super society is interesting and hints at plenty of mystery and intrigue, and there's already been some quite interesting powers. That's probably my favorite part of these type of stories, and the MC's powers are absolutely a stand out, making me very excited for how they'll develope down the line! Still an early story but with massive potential I'm looking forward to reading!
AnickerchenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This has a lot of potential! I found the world building very compelling and the MC surprisingly relatable. In the first few chapters I already got really emotional about his circumstances and motivations, even if there seems to be a lot left to discover about it background. There seem to be layers and layers of mysteries to unravel and I am very excited to see where this is going
RozernRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The writing is that kind where you can tell the author has a shot at earning your trust, just from the potential and competency their work implies when you read it. Humor can be hard to pull off, but I enjoyed this story a lot up to the current chapter. It has a good mix of serious and humor to balance out the narrative in a way that mirrors the thematic nature of the protagonist. I massively enjoyed binging this, especially the deceptive opening - that had me sit up and pay attention to what this story might be capable of.
Sp00kyGh0stRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Very interesting story so far! Enjoying the main character and his chosen career. The author has a solid writing style. Only a few mistakes here and there, but likely to be fixed in the future.
Overall very entertaining! Has everything I like in story, there’s set up for the future and the present is captivating too. All from an interesting viewpoint that is the main character.
ZagernRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This book is really fun. A lot more fun then I was ready for considering Lost Loops darker tones. It does start off a little bit heavy, but soon the comedy starts to weave its way in, and then it hits a good mix. I think the books strength is how it combos humour and seriousness. Some of the jokes dont hit but the ones that do had me giggling to myself. The serious moments also hit harder because the overall tone is lighter. Personally I just love the combo of jokes and superpowers, which is probably why I think the MC is so dope. All of characters are well written, with decently defined personalities and traits, along with desires and morales so that’s a nice change of pace as well. Really the powers are the sweet spot, we’ve only seen a handful of superhero so far but all of them have interesting abilities. The mystery is also cool, along with the world. Another review said it reminds them of Industrial Strength Magic and I feel that’s apt. Same sort of vibe, maybe a tad less serious and a different style of writing but still the same.
Also really big fan of the simple system. It’s unique but also easy to understand, which is nice when a lot of Litrpg books are getting a little out of hand. The only gripe I have with the book is the grammar but that’s something the author can and likely will fix with ease. The releases are also a bit sparse as well but from my understanding the author is working on Patreon chapters so I think it will become more consistent once that’s done. Overall definitely a recommendation to read this one, really interested to see where it goes!
Zed-RowRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
10/10 for a great start! Supes and great forces beyond our reckoning lie ahead (and silly, showy, sassy villainy). There are a number of small technical errors throughout every chapter (in particular, lots of apostrophes where they oughtn't be!) but the story is so darn entertaining I get dragged forwards anyways! I want to be supportive and leave a comment on each chapter or so but I'm often halfway through the next chapter before I realize it. If that isn't a strong sign that this is worth reading, I'm not quite certain what is.
GooberinoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I like the story and characters so far. The power system is cool so far and the MC's abilities are fun. I'm hoping that they evolve into full toon force-esque wackiness since that would definitely create some unique interactions.
Though please go back to earlier chapters and check the comments for grammar suggestions. This story really needs some double checking for simple mistakes.
OroborosRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Update: Unfortunately it looks like something has happened and the author has stopped writing even on their patreon, I hope they're well and extremely sad to see this go nowhere.
Firstly this is potentially filling the void that the completion of Industrial Strength Magic has left in my life...and that's big news.
At this early stage there's a motley crew of varied characters coalescing into a group with the potential for lots of humour and shared development. They're well written and extremely unique.
Storywise, a great start. We've had a short tournament type sub-arc, some exploration of new powers in a revenge sub-arc and early hints at the System the main character holds.
Interesting world building, some slight more tell over show initially but the details are being drip fed as the story progresses and it seems super interesting.
My one pick up, which I've mentioned in a chapter comment and thought about it for several others, is that theres a fair few grammatical errors in each chapter. It may be the speed the author is writing, that the spell checking tool is choosing the wrong word, the author has misheard known phrases and using them as they believe they are said. It's fairly minor but they always break me out of the immersion when reading the chapters.
In summary, an excellent early story, well worth your time with some miniscule issues you should look past.