Stargazers

Self-Published

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Description

Dr. Eric Saunders is summoned by a government he doesn't trust because they need his help. Despite his reservations, it was the end of the world and he was humanity's last hope.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2019
Author: PJ_Lowry

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 1
Views: 378

What readers say about Stargazers

“I enjoyed the characters especially. All other elements were well and good, but they didn't strike me as having a signature style to them. But that's not something to worry about at all, as its more of a pleasant side effect that develops overtime as a writ…”
hex4Royal Road4.5 / 5

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hex4Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I enjoyed the characters especially. All other elements were well and good, but they didn't strike me as having a signature style to them. But that's not something to worry about at all, as its more of a pleasant side effect that develops overtime as a writer.
The only thing I found distracting was the linguistic choices here and there and the occasional flat storytelling (just an example that comes to mind: the crescent moon necklace around the princess' neck seeming important somehow) but both of those can easily be addressed in the next revision.
As its not the final version, I feel obliged to rate it 4.5, but am entirely confident that the finished product will be worthy of a perfect rating.