Starfall
Self-Published
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Will write when more content is released.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- KaiFaust
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 49
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Chapters(49 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- s44Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Our hero, after making an internet bet about transmigrator success, finds himself in the body of a just-assassinated decadent super-rich young nobleman in a space empire far from home. But instead of getting to live it up with all the attractive young women around him, he has to cleverly navigate his way around their attempts to control, seize, suborn, or shackle his fortune, status, and person.
There are some hints of psi powers in the setting, but nothing besides intrigue and high-stakes power plays has appeared so far. The Russian-style MC is a classic fit for this kind of narrative, and besides some awkwardly double-narrated events in POV switches the storytelling is excellent. The translation has a few glitches, but fewer than the English errors in your typical RR venture.
Really amusing and a good pick to translate. - ButterzRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Well, how to start. The setting is amazing and it seems very well thought out. So yes, the idea is good and the story is interesting. Now, the problems.
The story seems to bounce around from event to event. There's always a degree of confusion on where he is and why he is there. And I don't believe this is a problem with the translation but more of a style problem. There is some poor grammar, syntax and word choices that happen in unedited translations. But they don't really take away from the story. Truthfully, I really want to like the story but the strange bounce from place to place without context is really unfortunate.
Character wise I would say its well thought out and interesting. Everyone seems to have their own motivations and machinisations.
Conclusively, I can say its not for me but other people may like it. A bit dissappointing as the setting is really interesting.