STARBREAKER [PROGRESSION FANTASY/SCI-FI]

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2024

Author

Desir

• Chapter 6: Regret - UPDATED
  Sep 16, 2024
• Chapter 5: Bad Idea - UPDATED
  Sep 15, 2024
• Chapter 4: Repetition - UPDATED
  Sep 15, 2024
• Chapter 3: Heartiles - UPDATED
  Sep 15, 2024
• Chapter 2: Breathe -UPDATED
  Sep 15, 2024
• Chapter 1: Condemned - UPDATED
  Sep 15, 2024

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• beadmanRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  One thing I always like in stories, is a bit of surrealism, especially in the intros, and this story has a decent amount of it. It opens with an intro that puts you in a surreal situation without explanation, and while you do catch on to what is going on fairly quickly it sets a good tone for feeling disoriented by your surroundings. This tone is carried on to the plot itself, which focuses on the idea of being thrust into a world you don't understand.
  Although one doesn't want to just describe the plot in what is suppose to be a review, the alien / surreal nature of what is happening is carried on into the plot itself, with a mystery relating to it being added fairly early on. The main character is framed as if they were frozen for a long time, and woke up in the far future. But then you get some evidence that seems to contradict this. Which frames their presence as a more mysterious thing, the details of which are not fully known. And it makes you interested in seeing how this mystery will develop.
  As for the style, the style is fairly decent, focusing on some of the things that would be highlighted by an outsider coming to a futuristic place. Such as new technology, and a big one they bring up multiple times - the way language changes over time. For grammar I didn't notice any overt mistakes, though admittedly I am not the best for noticing something's grammar. So I would only notice grammar mistakes if they were very glaring.
• M.A MOFFRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A story rich in description and action that has made it easy to flick from chapter to chapter. This will seem to some as an overly positive review, but in my opinion it earns it.
  It’s been a great read so far where the writing places you in the shoes of the MC right from the get go, letting you imagine the torment that Cyrus experienced during his three year long coma and subsequent awakening to a new foreign world.
  It stays strong as you read further and learn of Cyrus’ goals once awoken and his plan to get there, which is engaging and leads me onto the characters.
  The inner monologue for Cyrus, I think, is great. You get a feel for his emotions and reasons behind some of his actions, adding depth to the character which is complimented by Infra.
  Infra is a great tool for both the MC and as the reader. Cyrus, keen to learn about this new world, relies on Infra to help him out while simultaneously helps with the world building of the story.
  I’m interested to see how other characters play out like Enzo and ‘the Goblin’.
  No tense slips (that I’ve noticed) keeps the style strong and with minimal grammar mistakes, making for an immersive reading experience.
  The only issue I had was two or three instances of getting confused between the MCs thoughts and speech. Other than that it’s a strong first person narrative that I will continue to follow and read!
• The Eternal SkyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Starbreaker is a good addition in progression fantasy and sci-fi section, but it has some scope of improvement as well. Its growth is this one of its strongest suit. This power progression advancement is organic and consistent with what the audience should expect within a shonen; as they slowly watch how the protagonist rises grow stronger after each battle fought. The story starts with a bang, featuring intense scenes like battles against living suits of armor that strangle you shortly after the opening credits. The banter is light hearted that gives it a bit of life and helps lighten the mood.
  The companion Infra is easily the most memorable part of the novel. This figure gives the narrative some comedic relief and lightens up the heavier moments. The relationship between Infra and the MC definitely does pull some of those slower borders to make them still worth the read.
  It is a fast-paced read with plenty of action for the typical enthusiast and also great progression, particularly in power levels, for fans of protagonists improving their abilities. But if you want a rich, immersive world or meticulously structured storytelling, it might be wise to wait for the series as a whole to fully reveal itself.
• AuthorSeanHallRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  f you're a fan of progression fantasy with a sci-fi twist, Starbreaker by Desir is the kind of book you won't want to miss. From the moment I picked it up, I was hooked by its fascinating premise and immersive world. The story follows Cyrus Carod, an 18-year-old who wakes up after a three-year coma, only to discover that the world around him has drastically changed. With no memories of his past, he's thrust into a world of magic and advanced technology—think of a perfect blend of fantasy academy and futuristic tech.
  One of the strongest elements of this book is the way it handles its tropes. Sure, amnesia plots aren’t new, but they’re done well here, providing constant twists and opportunities for mystery. Waking up clueless with only a chip named Infra in his head as a guide, Cyrus has to navigate a warrior academy where his uncle resides. This setup allows for some great character development, and it’s perfect for readers who enjoy the underdog story, as Cyrus starts off weak and clueless but shows signs of growth and determination. The academy setting also provides plenty of rivalries, friendships, and challenges that shape his journey.
  The style of the book is engaging. The first-person narrative really works in this case, pulling you into Cyrus’s confusion and struggle. There’s something powerful about experiencing his emotions as he pieces together the puzzle of his own life and the new world he's been thrust into. The dialogue between Cyrus and Infra is also a clever way to keep the reader informed without feeling like it’s bogging down the plot with heavy exposition.
  There are a few areas where I thought the descriptions could be adjusted—sometimes I wanted a bit more world-building in certain scenes and a little less in others—but overall, the writing is solid. The balance between sci-fi and fantasy is well-executed, and the mysteries surrounding Cyrus’s past and the world keep the pages turning.
  The characters in the early chapters are interesting, especia
• CT_PhippsRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Starbreaker has a fairly classic opening similar to System Shock where the protagonist wakes up from a long coma with a computer chip in his brain. He's immediately tortured and brutalized in hopes of awakening his mystical power. He doesn't recognize the people, language, or world and wonders what has happened. The protagonist is understandably salty about this condition and I'm interested in seeing where the story is going. It's still early going but I'm intrigued by the world and am anxious to see what happens next. I'll update this review as the story goes on.
• Camadt (Alex Hancock)Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Overall
  I’m a big fan of the stories where the MC is weak and has to put in effort, sweat, and planning to progress through the story. The story of Cyrus sucked me in and I kept reading until I was caught up with everything that had been released. A great read and definitely looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
  Character
  Our MC is Cyrus Carod, an 18-year-old guy who just woke up from a coma. Considering how different things are, he might as well have been isekaied into someone else’s body. He has a chip in his head, his trusty guide Infra, to help him acclimate, but it’s going to be a long road for someone who has no past, doesn’t recognize the present, and needs to work twice as hard to be something in the future.
  Grammar
  I didn’t notice any grammatical errors. It was a nice, smooth read.
  Story
  The story starts with questions and keeps the mystery alive. Where did Cyrus come from? Why was he in a coma? How did he end up there? Who is he? What is he going to do to figure all of this out? It’s hard to start with someone weaker than a coma patient and now that Cyrus is awake he has to work to get stronger. But nothing is easy and he’s having to put in the work to get there.
  Style
  The author uses the internal dialogue between Cyrus and Infra as a good way to provide information within the constraints of a first person point-of-view. The history or other information provided never feels like an internal monologue which keeps the story moving.
• Elijah KingRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Overall: Starbreaker completely pulled me in from the start! It’s the perfect mix of sci-fi and fantasy, with a main character, Cyrus, who you really want to root for. The way the story balances action, mystery, and world-building keeps you hooked from the first chapter. It has a slower build at times, but it works because the pacing lets you feel Cyrus’s confusion and his journey to uncover his past. If you love stories where the character grows through struggle, this is a must-read.
  Style: The writing style is straightforward but effective. It doesn’t rely on overly flowery descriptions, which I liked because it lets the action and dialogue do the talking. The first-person narrative works really well for this kind of story since you’re right in Cyrus’s head, feeling everything he does as he tries to make sense of this new world. I also liked how the dialogue between Cyrus and Infra (the AI in his head) kept the story moving without heavy info dumps.
  Story: I’m a huge fan of progression fantasy, and this one hits all the right beats. Cyrus wakes up in a world he doesn’t recognize after being in a coma for three years, with no memories of his past. There’s magic, advanced technology, and a mysterious academy, which is just a perfect setting for an underdog story. Watching Cyrus go from completely lost to slowly gaining control over his powers is really satisfying. The world-building is intriguing, and I love how it mixes magic with sci-fi elements in a way that feels fresh.
  Characters: Cyrus is an easy protagonist to root for—he’s not instantly powerful, and he has to work for everything, which makes his journey feel earned. The supporting characters, like the sarcastic nurse and the enigmatic doctor, are interesting too, and I can’t wait to see how their roles develop in the story. I also love how the relationship between Cyrus and Infra is handled; their back-and-forth adds some humor and keeps things light even when the stakes are high.
  Grammar: The writing is cl
• Benjamin MwakonyaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Long story short (overall) - Starbreaker sets the stage for an interesting sci-fi/fantasy adventure with the world being a sandbox of potential and intriguing.
  Now for the long story:
  Style - Oddly enough, I can't say much about the style. It's serviceable. Nothing stands out as either good or bad but that's preferable in my opinion as it allows the story to do the talking and not the flowery prose.
  Story - Starbreaker feels like it's shaping up to be an epic tale filled with adventure, mystery and potential thrills!
  Grammer - again, no complaints here.
  Characters - Solid cast so far. Future developments and arcs could turn what is an acceptable set into a remarkable study as their humanity or lack thereof is tested.
  The protagonist, for example, is a man out of time and with nothing but a name and  disembodied voice in his head. Cyrus Carod will have to traverse a world that he cannot recall and barely understand and I think this puts him right next to us as the reader as the story unfolds before us which makes for good reading, in my opinion.
  So yeah. Those are my thoughts on Starbreaker and even though it's only just started, I can see this fiction reaching great heights if it makes use of the sandbox at its disposal.
• OccultoRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The series is an engaging blend of action, mystery, and personal growth. It’s fast-paced and immersive, with plenty of surprises and a protagonist who keeps you entertained with his wit and determination. Although it has some room for more in-depth world-building and emotional moments, it remains a thrilling and captivating read, especially for fans of character-driven, action-heavy narratives.
  The author’s style stands out for its humor and strong internal monologue. Cyrus’s voice is unique, mixing dry humor with introspection, and that adds a lot of personality to the story. The writing flows well, especially during action scenes, but there are moments where the humor slightly undercuts the tension. Still, the balance between lightheartedness and seriousness is generally well-managed.
  The story is both compelling and unpredictable, featuring a solid blend of mystery, combat, and self-discovery. As Cyrus dives deeper into the underground world, the stakes grow higher, and the plot moves forward in interesting, often surprising directions. The pacing is quick, and each fight or challenge adds depth to the plot, though more detail on the world-building and history could enhance the experience even more.
  The grammar is strong overall, with clean writing and minimal errors. The sentences are clear and concise, and the dialogue flows naturally. There are very few grammatical issues, making the series easy to follow and immersive. The style is informal, which suits the tone of the story, but it remains grammatically solid throughout.
  Cyrus is the standout feature of the series, a protagonist who balances vulnerability with humor and resilience. His internal growth is one of the strongest aspects of the story, making him relatable and engaging. Supporting characters like Goblin and Enzo are equally memorable, adding complexity and depth to the narrative. The relationships evolve naturally, giving the characters dimension and making the reader invested in their fates.
• Writers_AbloodRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Alright, let me get started by saying that this story is quite the surprise. The author, Desir, paints a very vivid picture with his words. Though at first I wasn't a huge fan of the first person writing style, it grew on me as I read.
  Overall, the story definitely deserves a 4.5 rating. It's not the best from the start, but it sets up all of its elements slowly. The pacing is faster than other stories and the writing also has slight humour added in. The fighting is clean and vivid, the world building is slow but intentional.
  To break it down further into its subcategories;
  Style wise, as I mentioned, it reads quite like a cyberpunk x fantasy mix. If magic was somehow a crucial part of our existence? Well maybe it'd read something like this. Desir has a nice way of putting things together with just enough insistence that you believe it. It's not dystopian, and neither is it a futuristic diaspora. It's what it was meant to be, just people living through their time period, figuring out what to do. It's quite difficult to "casually" write a story, and it really adds to it. The author makes believable jokes, and it all feels real. There's no random events without a logical build-up. But, at the same time, the story pushes a lot of jargon your way. Now for a new reader these are hard to adapt to. Though its a part of the stories charm, it's still not something easy to get past for the first few chapters, hence a 3.5 rating. If you like sci-fi you'll probably find it to be easier to read.
  Grammar wise there were no glaring issues so I gave it a 5 rating. I am not a particularly strict person regarding grammar. But I do believe the author did a great job at writing this.
  Story Wise I give it a 4/5. Somethings are not clearly put together. For example, what his chip (Infra) can do. It seems as though the chip is somehow all knowledgeable and yet oblivious. Though the author can definitely fix this later on, or simply retcon it, or even explain it with various reasons. But p