Star wars : Heroes Burn Forever. ( Les Héros Brûlent Eternellement )

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Born of violence, born in violence. She will have to survive, she will have to fight to control her destiny. She will have to make a choice between shadow or light, order or chaos, life or her death. She will have to make a place for herself in the galaxy, even if it means breaking it or being broken by it."Behold the patron of glory! Eyes afire with righteous might; skin bathed in the warm blood of the enemy witness the glory and blazing fury!His wrath rains down like fire from above. Bodies encircle him like a pyre. His hand never falters; his courage never wanes as the hordes overwhelm him.His last thoughts turn to his true love. He feels no fear. No pain. The chill of death cannot cool his passion. The hero burns eternal."Tala-Reh recites part of the poem

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Status: Ongoing
Year: 2025
Author: Hammircal

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 70
Views: 41,570

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Community Reviews(3)

ionisationRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The story as far as I have read is pretty decent but the Grammar is just really bad, it often throws you out of the story and confuses the hell out of me and just kills the flow. It has potential but as the other review has already mentioned it BADLY needs some form of editing be it by a person or some software because the potential is there but it has to be brought to the surface.
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Ren-RedarRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Honestly the story is excellent but the failure to keep pronoun gender straight and the incorrect word usage makes it very hard to read.
The story is an interesting one with an mc I can identify with.
The issue with the grammar is the kind I see a lot in machine translated Chinese web novels the ai can't keep track of which characters are which gender or infact people and not objects. I might knote that a single character was often referred to as he, she, they, and it at different points in the story.
NaClisSaltyRoyal Road
★ 1.0
So I could only get through seven chapters. The story and characters seem to be promising but the grammar is atrocious. I’ve read other fictions by people who did not have English as a first language and they were not this bad.
Even asking an ai to at least check the grammar would be a step in the right direction.
i don’t think I can understate how bad the grammar is. Prepositions are mixed up. None verbs and adjectives are in the wrong order. And as the writer is obviously French from the title it is clear they never learned not to refer to objects by their gender in English.
Its a shame the grammar is so bad because it looks like the story was going to be interesting, I just can’t force myself to read this.
as I see I haven’t written enough for the word limit I’m just gonna have to conclude with a copy
as I see I haven’t written enough for the word limit I’m just gonna have to conclude with a copy
as I see I haven’t written enough for the word limit I’m just gonna have to conclude with a copy
as I see I haven’t written enough for the word limit I’m just gonna have to conclude with a copy
as I see I haven’t written enough for the word limit I’m just gonna have to conclude with a copy