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What readers say about SPIRIT

“This story is great and deserve way more attention. It's well paced, neither incredibly slow or too rushed, the characthers even thought a bit clichéd, have their own distinct personalities. The part i am truly loving is the world build, the magic system an…”
TiAspettoRoyal Road4.5 / 5
“it is very interesting so far(chapter till Framed). style: I can not say anything about style bc with every author it is different. Story: the story is very interesting and if it goes on like this it will become one of my favourites. Grammar: I am not good…”
kuraitjaRoyal Road4.5 / 5

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TiAspettoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This story is great and deserve way more attention.
It's well paced, neither incredibly slow or too rushed, the characthers even thought a bit clichéd, have their own distinct personalities.
The part i am truly loving is the world build, the magic system and the spirit themselves.
Not gonna say anything else becouse it would be a spoiler but if you like a good fantasy with plot and an actual magic system go ahead and read it!
A random lurker.
p.s. keep this awesome work up!
kuraitjaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
it is very interesting so far(chapter till Framed).
style: I can not say anything about style bc with every author it is different.
Story: the story is very interesting and if it goes on like this it will become one of my favourites.
Grammar: I am not good at grammer my self so cannot judge on that.
Character: I like how the mc is a real genius instead of someone who just learns fast(thought he does that too). I believe a real genius has good adaptability and imagination. the character of the MC and his closed people is good but you forget to show the side characters like the prince who his father teaches.
overall it is very promising, I just hope this story keeps going and not stops like some other great story's on this site
CsupremeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I find it be a pretty enjoyable read, I'm seriously loving the story.
ScotlandForsytheRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Great idea, but it has Grammer ussues. The sentences don't connect well. Still a very good idea though...
grinderotaRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Didnt want to read past the first chapter because of the grammar(meaning I didn't want to ruin the story for myself before it got fixed), storywise, it reminds me a bit of DE, but I only read the first chapter, so get a proof reader if you an please
Also to the people who downvoted the guy above me, You do realize that the whole purpose of this site is for authors to try writing and get better at it.....and that's not gonna happen if people just say the story is good without mention what could be fixed...........honestly they came here to be rated not "schmoozed"