Spell Analyst

Self-Published

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Description

Synopsys:

Jude a Systems Analyst and Murl a Physicist find a new universe created through absorbing information from our own. This universe is quite different as it was overly influenced by computers. During one experiment to create avatars to explore said universe the two get sucked in themselves. Somehow Jude gets sent thousands of years later than Murl and he finds himself in a world of magic and swords. However, there is a game like system that seems to control everything.

Jude decided to gain levels and power so that he can find out what happened to his friend Murl. Along the way, he stumbles across a quest that will lead him to the truth of the Universe.

WARNING: MAY CONTAIN GOD AND SATAN

Authors Goals:

This fiction is part of the Pledge. This story will be finished no matter what!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: demante

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 1,300
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Community Reviews(10)

UltrajustinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm very much enjoying your story thank you 👍.
Though I'm not religious whatsoever, I love your creativity and use of faith to create an interesting and novel story; please continue as you are!!
Crow85Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
One of the better new LitRPG stories. At the time of writing this review, there are 19 chapters.
The story so far has a lot of potential and is definitely worth checking out. If you are a new reader of this story I would implore you to persist through first two chapters as they aren't representative of the rest of the adventure and merely serve as a device to create a framework for the story and can be a little uninviting.
The story is inspired by both LitRPG genre and also has some elements of wuxia. At the moment it's too soon to tell how it will develop in the future. The story includes Christian mythos.
The author clearly already knows where the story is going so I hope he'll persist until the end. Release schedule so far is ~1 chapter per 3 days and chapters are long enough to be worth the wait.
I recommend the story to all Lit RPG (and wuxia) fans.
SL1216Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I completly admit that this isn't an offical review and their are some grammer errors. However This is a world that I love, the MC might be overpowered but it is showing where his bounderys are. The grammer is an issue at the start but itgets better and I respect the decitation. I really want this to contine. Like what is going to happen to Joradan, Elsie, and the others. This creation resonated with me like no other seting it tieing first place with Defiance of the Fall. Author if you are reading this then I hope you have been having a wonderful time as a dad or mabey dealling with teenagers. If you have time pease try to expaned this world and its wondfuly built charactters. I saw you were on this January, I will be checking on this so love your work and hope you can come back :)
dendel5Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
My first time giving a review so I have no idea what to do or say . So I am going to keep this short. I like this story a lot and I demand more chapters! I think this is how it works . I guess that’s it.
Keep up the good work :).
SkarblefaceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Seeing as there aren't any reviews for this yet, wanted to add one since it really is worth the read. Note that this is after Ch4 so it can still either get better or worse, but so far it seems that it's going to get better.
So far the Characters and Setting are very interesting (from what we've seen so far) There's still plenty of space for it to grow and uses the setting to explain why magic works.
Looking forward to more chapters
pewpewcachooRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story is pretty cool, the MC uses his programming knowledge as a spell caster. The overall story was good and I was enjoying it.
Writing is good, grammar is good.
I have no real complaints about the story, I just kinda lost interest in it like most stories. Expect for fan fiction, I love that stuff.
BKLRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Listen, I have only read one chapter and what I read needed a lot of polish and editting.
So I'm giving my score based on how much work has been put into this title. 9 months, 92 entries. Good job.
My review for this title was made because there are people on this site who make several accounts and give their own works 5 star reviews. While bombarding other people's works with .5 star reviews.
Real writers deserve recognition and I'm going to give this one 4 stars based on how much dedication the writer has put into it.
The struggle is real. Keep at it.
AdirellRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This is very good story with well developed MC. I liked that he is a person with good morals as there are many stories with moraly grey or even despicable characters. I also like how creative he is.
Maybe the most interesting aspect of this story is the world where it is placed. It's a fantasy world but with hidden from most people, technical, machinery-like, computer-like basis. And the MC is using it and his knowledge of informatic systems to his advantage.
jlkcRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This story has an interesting concept which fails to live up to its potential due to poor execution.
The biggest problem is with how everything other than the dialogue is exposition. This is only made worse by grammatical errors caused by the author not understand many of the words he is using.
The story should be readable if you are fine with mental corrections as you are reading and a huge amount of exposition.
Shadow9xRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Was great until the MC got his unique class, then it went downhill.
MC doesn't think about any consequences. "Hello person-I-have-just-met. Let me just give you a brand new class with 3 - 5+ years of progress. Oh, here's some legendary skill as well."