Spatial storage of all things ( Dropped )

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Description

The Fourth Best Ability Of The Universe is in the hands of a peculiar assassin

This will include a sort of system and some half assed comedythe MC will be a jerk and I will try to make him true to his characterAh and no harem

Dropped

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FrostPrismRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Just finished chapter 30, I enjoy the story and would recommend others to read. My only issue with it is the incorrect grammar you can find in almost every chapter. It doesn't really make you not understand what is trying to be said but it breaks the flow of what is happening by having to think of what word was supposed to be used. Overall, it is not a huge thing but should still warrant another look at each chapter to fix all the kinks in the writing. But other than that is is quite good and I will continue to read.
MrHrulginRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Super powerful protagonist who, within moments of being dropped into a strange situation at the beginning of the story can do things like: "Immediately, Luke quietly killed 7 goblins near him with a stab to the throat." There's trimming out unnecessary combat descriptions, but this is just silly.
The formatting is also very, very poor. There's no useful delineations between the system and the protagonist. I'm not sure if the formatting was better in the author's word processor of choice, but it's very bad here.