Sovereign Immortal (Technically not cancelled?)
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In the Realm of Immortals, there are two paths to become a Sovereign, both equivalent in strength.
To follow the Body, becoming a Supreme Martial Sovereign, boldly refining the Body with Heavenly Tribulation Thunder and daring to face the Five Elements!
To be an Unparalleled Lord of the Grand Firmament, unfettered from the restrictions of Heaven, countless people follow this path.
Another to follow the Soul, becoming a Grand Spirit Sovereign, Nourishing the Soul with Yin and Yang and wielding the five elements on the fingertips of their own!
To be an Incomparable Sage of the Everlasting Heavens, wielding the Laws of the Universe as their own, countless others follow this path.
Yet since Ancient Times and bygone Era's, have there not been three paths? A Path which made the other two paths a lesser path? Suppressed all cardinal directions and made even the Ancient Undyings flee in terror and hide!
Faded into obscurity and lost by thought, Ancient Undyings remember not the name for they are too young, even Immortals of the Oldest Era only remember it as a childhood legend.
Without the Path, the Immortal Realm faces great danger without a True Leader to claim it's leadership and the inhabitants fight each other daily and countlessly all for the sake of becoming a Lesser Sovereign!
As two Ancient Undyings face each other, a rift in space is made and falling down is an Entity beyond that of the Immortal Realm, causing waves in the Immortal Realm.
The Entity falls down and down from the Realm Above, to the Immortal Realm below and eventually to the Mortal World.....
As this happens, a young boy in the Mortal World looks to the stars and sees upon a falling meteor and chases it...
The path of a Sovereign Immortal? A True Sovereign? Who in the generation can achieve it when the Rift has caused a change in the Realm, reopening the path?
Old Summary:
In the Realm of Immortals, there are two paths to become a Sovereign, both equivalent in strength.
One follows the Body to become a Supreme Martial Sovereign. Refining their bodies with thunder and daring to go against the five elements.
Another follows the Soul to become a Grand Spirit Sovereign. Nourishing their souls with Yin and Yang and holding the power of the five elements.
Yet since Ancient Times have there not been three paths? The path of cultivating both the Body and Soul to become an Immortal Sovereign. But as time has passed, who remembers such a path?
Faded into obscurity and lost in thought it is but a small dream to those Ancient Immortals remembering such tales in their youth.
As the Path is forgotten, The Immortal Realm is in Chaos without it's Sovereign, The Realm inhabitants fight each other daily merely for the sake of a little more power or hope in becoming a Sovereign.
But the True Threat doesn't lay with the Chaos within but rather the Chaos outside as foes from other Realms come to conquer them.
Yet in all this Chaos, in a World of Mortals lies a young Mortal boy chasing a "meteor" an event which in time would shake waves and cause quakes in the Realm of Immortals.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- SlowPro
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 51
- Views
- 60,859
Chapters(34 total)
- Chapter 23.5 Kong Hu (Backstory)Sep 16, 2017
- Chapter 23. Celestial Lightning BranchSep 3, 2017
- Chapter 22. Mercenaries....Sep 2, 2017
- Chapter 21. Leaving HomeSep 2, 2017
- Chapter 20. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Twelve)Aug 27, 2017
- Chapter 19. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Eleven)Aug 14, 2017
- Chapter 18. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Ten)Aug 12, 2017
- Chapter 17. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Nine)Aug 6, 2017
- Chapter 16. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Eight)Jul 29, 2017
- Chapter 15. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Seven)Jul 8, 2017
- Chapter 14.1 Beast ArmyJul 1, 2017
- Not a chapter (Announcement)Jun 29, 2017
- Chapter 14. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Six)Jun 28, 2017
- Chapter 13. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Five)Jun 26, 2017
- Chapter 12. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Four)Jun 25, 2017
- Chapter 11. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Three)Jun 15, 2017
- Chapter 10. Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part Two)May 27, 2017
- Chapter 9 Four Tests, The Mind-Heart, The Physique, The Spirit-Soul and Essence (Part One)May 26, 2017
- Chapter 8.75 Holy Illumination, Infernal Dusk and Zhenren (Part Two)May 9, 2017
- Chapter 8.75 Holy Illumination, Infernal Dusk and Zhenren (Part One)Apr 29, 2017
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Community Reviews(2)
- MajesticPurpleMartinRoyal Road★★★ 2.5It's boring, most of it is boring.
He really shouldn't have made the .5 and etc. Chapters, as they were mainly filler.
I didn't care that much, but then he made Chapter 23.5 which is kind of stupid since I thought he would finally stop doing the .5 chapters. (That's the primary reason I'm making a review)
And as Roktah has said, this novel is indeed an Infodump, I thought it would get better, but then I saw 23.5, more infodump......
Also yeah, some of the things aren't really necessary and I feel that the characters are slightly forced (Not that I'm doing any better)
Also, I like the story, but it's kind of cliche, but it's hard to make a non-cliche story, he could've done better if he fixed the prologues.
As for the characters, as I said before, they feel like they are forced and I think they're really dull and their thoughts and ideas are random and dependent on the author's thoughts at that time.
Pretty good grammar, I think he uses the same software as me. (I know him in real-life, we both use Grammarly, but there are some mistakes that are still hidden, also it's American English)
Style Score is ok I guess.
But overall, the novel is boring, I find it a bit dull, I only read because I know him in real life and hope that the story picks up, also I was told to give a realistic review, so here it is. - RoktahRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Thats the best way to describe this novel.
you see chapter 4.5,8.5,8.75 complete info dumps.
The author gives way too much unnecessary information and descriptions are too long for unnecesarry things.
i red up to chapter 10 and time spent on actual content couldnt be less.
The plot itself is actually not bad but the info dumping is just too much, there are things i dont need to know right now and what i know i have forgotten by the time it comes up anyway. Like i give a damn what the coming of age ceremony is and that there is actually a ceremony before that at the age of 5.
the chapter distribution tells you already, how much unneeded information you are going to get flooded with. just look at chapter 9-20 that is a f..ing basic aptitude test, 11 chapters for that really? and by the way the chapters are of decent length
grammar is ok tough if you dont mind infodumping you might enjoy it afterall you do get a lot of backstory