Soulstorm

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

I knocked on death's door.I learned its disturbing truth.I withstood the stream and the storm.This is the tale of my journey.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
147
Views
75,414

Chapters(27 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • MoostagRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    i really enjoyed reading this it's how earth became a xianxia world
  • PeppermancerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This story started rather weak in my opinion. But it feels like as soon as volume two came around, you hit your stride. You have handled religion very well, as well as human nature, without condemning all humans. You have a very inventive enemy, and I love your version of the land of the dead. You took tropes from other series, and integrated it seamlessly with your story. If you keep up this level of quality and even improve it, I will gladly add it to my top 5. My only recommendation is slow it down a bit. Don't rush through your story. Even the most boring chapters can be used to convey things to the reader, whether it is the importance of a side character, or subtly providing info about the world. Keep it up good sir!
    P.S. Also, you lose your tiger, you let loose your tiger. Its a very important difference!
  • MirrondRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    One thing I must say - you had a great idea. Really great. But your writing... I can't say it sucks (it's far from that), but it's too chaotic, much too fast, there are some mistakes from time to time, and... well.. why I understand that it's a xianxia (I don't like that genre, but I can't consider it being an error, as there are people out there that actually likes it), but you are much too focused on your main character. We know literally nothing about anyone beside him (well... apart from names of some of them). And he is getting a cliche Ouch Humans Are So Bad So Good I Am Above Them All mindset. Not to mention you are making a pretty unconvincing vision of postapocalyptic world.
    In short - this needs a rewrite. With current 23 chapters growing to, like, >100, each twice as big as the one you have here.