Soulstorm
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
I knocked on death's door.I learned its disturbing truth.I withstood the stream and the storm.This is the tale of my journey.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- bigbadkater
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 147
- Views
- 75,414
Chapters(27 total)
- continuation of soulstormJun 2, 2016
- Not an chapter but an announcementDec 20, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 10 A Cycle of Origin and EndDec 20, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 9Dec 19, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 8Dec 18, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 7Dec 17, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 6Dec 16, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 5Dec 15, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 4Dec 14, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 3Dec 13, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 2Dec 12, 2015
- Arc 2 Chapter 1Dec 11, 2015
- Chapter 14Dec 10, 2015
- Chapter 13Dec 9, 2015
- Chapter 12Dec 8, 2015
- Chapter 11Dec 7, 2015
- Chapter 10Dec 6, 2015
- Chapter 9Dec 5, 2015
- Chapter 8Dec 4, 2015
- Chapter 7 Strange new worldDec 3, 2015
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Community Reviews(3)
- MoostagRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0i really enjoyed reading this it's how earth became a xianxia world
- PeppermancerRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This story started rather weak in my opinion. But it feels like as soon as volume two came around, you hit your stride. You have handled religion very well, as well as human nature, without condemning all humans. You have a very inventive enemy, and I love your version of the land of the dead. You took tropes from other series, and integrated it seamlessly with your story. If you keep up this level of quality and even improve it, I will gladly add it to my top 5. My only recommendation is slow it down a bit. Don't rush through your story. Even the most boring chapters can be used to convey things to the reader, whether it is the importance of a side character, or subtly providing info about the world. Keep it up good sir!
P.S. Also, you lose your tiger, you let loose your tiger. Its a very important difference! - MirrondRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5One thing I must say - you had a great idea. Really great. But your writing... I can't say it sucks (it's far from that), but it's too chaotic, much too fast, there are some mistakes from time to time, and... well.. why I understand that it's a xianxia (I don't like that genre, but I can't consider it being an error, as there are people out there that actually likes it), but you are much too focused on your main character. We know literally nothing about anyone beside him (well... apart from names of some of them). And he is getting a cliche Ouch Humans Are So Bad So Good I Am Above Them All mindset. Not to mention you are making a pretty unconvincing vision of postapocalyptic world.
In short - this needs a rewrite. With current 23 chapters growing to, like, >100, each twice as big as the one you have here.