Sky Prince
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A land once ruled by dragons, a peaceful place without war or strife, was thrown into chaos by a dragon that betrayed his own. The war brought upon by this betrayal did not last long; but in its aftermath, many races were enslaved and a few had even become extinct! Then, the Betrayer and his army just disappeared into the West, leaving the East in shambles. Now, signs of a prophecy told before the war ages ago, started to appear at the same time the armies in the West are starting to stir again with the promise of bloodshed, war, and death. The final sign that the time of the prophecy has come, a prophecy that says:“A boy will be born unlike any other, his destiny is to destroy or save the world, his choice to make or break it.”Join this boy's journey and see where his great destiny leads him. Will he choose to save the world, or will he become the incarnation of destruction itself?!Warning lots of blood and violence. There will also be some sexy time ; )*Thanks to Vocaloid for editing the synopsis a bit.*A great thanks to Shimitsu for the awesome cover pic! Please check out his other works.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Mr Sir
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- 4.3/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)
- StarlesssRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Even tho English is not the authors main language and the grammar can get confusing some times this story is the best ive read on this site to date. The characters feel so fleshed out, and the world corrupted and deep. You can see how every race only cares for themselves and how the MC has to try to bring them back together, while learning about the world and its hidden history as he goes along
- ArkhamRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Just found this hidden gem and must say that this story is brilliant.
You convey what dragons are. Pride and absolute power. It’s really good.
The story is great, very interesting and innovative, however there are a couple of threads poking out here and there, but still very good, and certainly very solid.
Their is depth and emotions regarding the MC and the other major characters. I only hope this does not have another cliche haram where the girls are just there for show.
Grammar has its ups and downs. I honestly do not pay it much attention, because I can usually just skip right over it and still understand what he is trying to say quite easily.
Every time I read a fantastic story such as this I always fear the author might stop it halfway, which I hope you don't. - unoRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is probably one of my favourite stories on this site. I'm surprised this doesn't have more popularity! Not much of a review writer, but just wanted to say keep up the great work!!! Can't wait for more chapters!
- WannabeproofreaderRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0No really I'm reviewing the title, I have come to really like this LN and would like others to discover it as well and the title isn't helping. If you could just shorten it to Sky Prince it would look a lot more appealing to the general public. Or you could not, just a tip.
And for all the people saying the girls are unfaithful(which they aren't) or the MC should rage out more, he's still quite young and new to interactions with other people so he won't just kill everyone. - Adc190Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5After reading about 50+ chapters so far in less than a couple of days, I've come to the conclusion that this fiction is absolutely UNDERRATED. Now let's get to the point.
Style: Simple, easy to understand. Just like most RRL fictions. Nothing extraordinary. What started as a generic RRL plot turned into a promising tale of vengeance over the past few weeks. A Harem plot where women don't alwats fawn over the MC and the step sister only holds platonic love. This doesn't change the fact that it has a Harem but it definitely does make the fiction more enjoyable to people like me who don't prefer women being treated as a tool for lust.
Furthermore, the chapter length is way above the RRL average and it is very evident that the writer is a master of details and expressions. 4/5.
Story: To be honest, when I first started reading this fiction, I expected this one to soon lean towards plot holes and one sided action scenes. However, to my surprise, the plot just kept on getting better and better. The fiction is very original and very superior compared to RRL standards. Won't say much here, no spoilers. 4/5.
Grammar: Most of the chapters are well above the RRL mark but there are a couple where you can clearly notice that the writer has not proof read them. The vocabulary used is not very rich but in comparison to most other fictions, it is definitely above par. I'm not implying that the writing is childish, infact all I'm saying is that it isn't the vocabulary you'll find in the popular published novels. However judging the writing of this fiction with published novels would be really unfair so I've given my rating in comparison to a few other fictions on RRL. 3.5/5.
Character: I don't know how everyone defines character development but I definitely do not agree with a few who feel that a change in the mentality or the thinking pattern of a character amounts to character development because you can't expect a character to change the way he/she thinks overnight.
However, i - ColdWyndRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I found this quite frustrating to read but for some reason I still liked it a lot.
- saborsoarRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This story is better than half the crap ive read on this site. I honestly dont think ppl are realy reading the story they just want the op main to act op not realizing that telling the whole world your the Dragon there to save them paints a giant target on you. For those that say he only needs to tell a few I say this, the only way two people can keep a secrect is if one is dead. Agree that a harem isnt needed though. All in all this is a great story and I recommend you read it an judge for yourself how it is. Read like decent paced novel to me ;)
- GreadeRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The main things I want to talk about is the grammar and the characters.
The author misplaces a decent amount of the quotation marks or just doesn’t place them. This makes it confusing when trying to determine who is speaking. I have also noticed a lack of commas in the entire story. I would be surprised to find a single comma per chapter. Sometimes I just have to read a sentence several times to understand what is being said, but it doesn’t bother me too much.
The character is part dragon at the least. I am confident that 99% of people have the same general idea of dragons. Whenever someone mentions a dragon, I personally imagine a winged reptile with tyrannical strength and a large pride. And this is why I have a problem with the MC. He is supposed to be the savior of the magic races and I assume that you wanted him to be powerful. So why is he planning on swearing fealty to the Dark Elves? This pissed me off.
When the high elves looked at him funny because he just slaughtered around 100 orcs and then sat on their dead bodies, they had betrayed him. But when this nosy a** princess follows him, or when the prince treats him like crap, or when he is punished for speaking out against the fat a** and gets 30 lashes, the MC just takes it and says its all for the war. Where is his pride at? This pissed me off.
The MC also seems somewhat clueless in many things like war itself, which I find ridiculous considering he was born to wage war.
I also don’t think your harem is turning out as well as you planned. Who would want two annoying and conniving girls as a part of their harem? Yet the MC just ignores or forgives everything they do. Yeah, Trisha tried to kill me but its okay. Oh thats right, that one dark elf princess was just trying to use me but its okay, she’s hot. If you made the character human then this would be more acceptable in my opinion.
The prince experiences a complete 180° turn and is now MCs best friend.
After reading the first 5 chapters I was excited abou - Kurayn-senseiRoyal Road★★ 2.0Author, sorry for the poor review but there are many things in your novel that goes poof and wew that I can't seem to get the point of whose POV is it or the grammar or the mis-spellings.a
Let's talk with POV first. It's all over the place! First it was the MC then it was the Heroine then it was the Master and so on. Can you do a somewhat interactive way to address this problem because it ruins the whose reading process if you don't know who's talking.
Second, Grammar. I mean dude/gal, I've read so many typos along the way that it makes me go nuts. /He/ becomes /she/. /Is/ becomes /are/ and vice versa. Apostrophe's are everywhere and inputted not in their proper places. Try finding an editor or a type-setter for this instance if you can't do it.
Then there are the misspellings. Guerilla becomes gorilla and so on. I know sometimes as excitement of writing takes place we sometimes neglect this but we could do a review on our works before finishing, right?
Then there are your "ghost" characters. Elyna or Elena? Slyfer or Sfyler? There are many names that were mentioned that were not mentioned before. Even in your earlier chapters. We all know the MC is only called "Estund" then why did the name "Slyfer" came to be? It happened before he chose his name and no, I don't mean the first chapter.
Also character development. You're words are so jumbled-up that we don't know how they came to be. The only CD that I know came from the MCand even that was frigging hard to understand. Can he or can he not control his rage? How did one of those old dragon spirits assimilate with him? Are the dragons vengeful or not? MC tries to kill, dragon spirits stop him. MC doesn't want to kill, dragon spirits pushes him to kill. And how was it that we didn't know that the MC is a vegetarian before his talk to his master about his "hunts"? The protagonist want to unite all to declare war on the west, right? Then why the hell did he do a self-sacrifies to defend the dark elf king? What the hell - CeruleanRoyal Road★ 0.5The Mc is literally just a tool with no real choice for anything hardle a Mc.I mean what’s with all your bullshit secret s when you don’t even need most of them I mean he can’t tell peolpe he’s like with the dragons or that he want to create peace this is just retarded so many useless things one of the worst novels i read.