She Has Incredible Talents

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lone has been alive for far too long. Scratch that, she hasn't been dead for long enough. Ever since she had died on Earth, her homeworld, she has been reborn into lives she's not sure she should remember.

When lone is reborn into a new world, Terrestria, she doesn't cry. She is resigned to the fact that once again, she’s alive. The sweet release of death is still on the far, far horizon. It's only until she opens her infant eyes that she realizes she's finally been reborn as a human…almost. However, after coming face to face with a peculiar screen detailing classes, skills, and her…health? Stamina?...Is that Mana? She realizes what kind of world she has been born into.

A world of classes, stats, magical items, quests, dungeons and more.

Unfortunately, being reborn into an orphanage as a half-elf half-human in a Human kingdom that is at war with Elves doesn't exactly do her any favors. One rife with forced class choosing and oppressive attitudes doesn't quite add the a positive atmosphere. Quite the opposite, really. Yet, that doesn't matter when lone's past life experiences give her skills that would put any seasoned adventurers stats to shame.

Follow Ione as she grows up in Whisperwind Valley, gains allies, kills more than a couple people here and there and acquires skills she really shouldn't have from her past lives. Once Ione gets her class, she knows that it's time to really start making a difference, although be warned: that difference involves a lot of slaughter. Whether bad or good, she will be ready for it with open arms, and mouths.

This story includes: Adult themes, gore, LitRPG elements, base building, OP MC, swearing, my own brand of humor (absurdist, deadpan), manipulative MC, no romance, no harem, there is mind control- not towards the MC, power hungry MC, orphan MC

Something to note: I'm also an artist, so I will eventually be releasing art of the characters, setting, map, beast encyclopedia and whichever else I can think of. Requests are welcome! (Cover page by me!)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
2,460
Views
514,164

Chapters(43 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • Aki-chiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The marks of a great power fantasy, I believe, are very well represented in this novel. Be it potential for growth and power creep management or the creation of stakes the reader can get invested in, it is all there, our know it all protagonist having realistic trauma, thoughts and even proper interactions molded by who she is.
    I say all of this, and despite disconsidering some infrequent gramatical mistakes, I would still be remiss to give this novel full marks.
    Not only are many an interaction close to being forced due to how uncertainties and mental disquiet are used, but the protagonist herself is in a rather grimdark world where even racist assholes have some kind of plan going on, a rather dangerous path to take with any novel, so consider me wery of future failures and a bit overly conscious of those present.
    Overall though, I have high hopes for Ione and her story, the system of Terrestria having some interesting aspects, the characters flashed being attention grabbing and the sheer promise of the narrative as a whole a thing that can break through my jaded heart, with a pacing that leaves you wanting more (which really makes the whole once a week thing a shame, but oh well.)
  • Roman00007Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This novel is different from many others. Is has same start but story progress quite good it is very promising story.
    Hope that it will advance and has character growth not just skills.
    World building is quite good. But till now only orphanage is shown.
    Hope that the antagonist is story will not be idiots and progress
    It has potential to be very good but just hope author did not just ruin the good novel.
  • TheNormanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A child-sized story done right. The main character is still a child (8 or 9 at the time of this review) and their scope has been kept correct for that age. yes, she is far smarter and mentally older, but she isn't running off to challenge the gods at this time. She IS laying the groundwork for being able to do so when she is older and reasonably dealing with things around her.
  • killionRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I suspect the author to be reincarnated and has skills related to story telling. I’m hooked. Can’t wait to see where this goes. the love and care put into this story bleeds through. I’m going to cry and I’m going to love it for making me cry. Thank you.
  • rhexasRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    So, I didn't know what to expect when I clicked on this. I saw in the rising stars, saw the title, laughed at the title and decided to give it a go. Then I find out that the main character gets born fully aware right out of the birth canal. And immediately, she's cussing in her own inner monologue. This alone was enough to get me to keep reading because that dichotomy just sets up for some really interesting story elements.
    We find that our main character, lone, is reincarnated and has lived many, many lives. And, when she's born, she remembers them all. Yet this is the first world that had a system and lone's first life was as a human where she enjoyed video games.
    I think that's enough background to get you going. If you don't like that premise, then this might not be for you; however, I've enjoyed the story immensely and binged the first 29 chapters over 3 days. It'd have been less, but life is busy.
    I felt like I understood lone as a person as well as the entire supporting cast. While some characters don't have much depth outside of being your stock racist (looking at you Belan), many do. You see them grow and you see lone grow as well.
    I was also immensely pleased that, at the time I binged these chapters, they were 97% completely fine grammar wise. There are notes on some where the author mentions going back to edit or revise some things and that's really encouraging to see. I follow a pretty big story on Royal Road whose author seems like they don't even read their own work. Wrong characters are used, tenses are off, and grammar is just bad. This is really refreshing.
    Lastly, the main thing that might put some people off is that this story is pretty dark. You can tell from the war and the setup of the orphanage that things are not okay in this world and lone herself does some pretty cold things. She's not unfeeling. She does process the violence she does (at first)...but when you make her "list", it's going to be brutal, violent, and guilt free.
    If you want a
  • Nanashi22Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The best start to this kind of novel I have ever seen.
    Style is fantastic and I find nothing to complain about, the storyline and how events are portrayed is a smooth ride and you won't find any hiccups.
    The Story is quite honestly eye-opening. On paper the premise seems like the simplest of things, a person remembers all their past lives and those experiences bring advantages to them in a LitRPG setting, but after reading this I'm a little bit embarrassed to have thought what I'd read previously was any good. Quite literally, the introductions of these elements and their respective progressions are so natural I had to introspect upon my knowledge because it's like other books had become just the slightest bit transparent, reading this story made me unconsciously feel like other stories I'd read with these genres were less memorable, that they were less real. And it was done so easily it feels, not just seems but Feels like this work was standard quality and what I'd read before was subpar.
    Grammar, dialogue, and speech placement were amazing.
    All side characters were good and secondary characters were well done. The main character is what I hoped more protagonists are like, she also draws from that same uncanny valley that the author used to make other works seem subpar. She's just nigh-perfect in execution, and the only reason she is not perfection itself is because nobody has the same tastes. but that even seafood can be loved by seafood haters if made at the pinnacle of cooking.
    I say with full conviction that you will regret not trying the story.
  • Bruce cRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    A unique take on reincarnation, the MC gains a bit from each remembered life... and she has had many.  She then takes her time to develop these skills in quirky, but interesting fashion.
    It did lose me a bit when she reshaped her appearance and Harold shows up... a bit too much for me.
  • BrGastlRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The charachters or at least the MC and some extras are mainly cold blooded psycopaths. While that isn't a fault in its entirety its hard to empathize with these kind of characters. The story being 1st person point of view enhances that problem, because the dissociation the MC has to other side characters makes even those other cast members seem unapproachable in my opinion.
    The story is your average reincarnation. Only that the MC is totally overpowered frim the get go. The only struggle so far that the MC faces is trying to fit in by living a normal life. Otherwise MC probably could have fled into the woods while being a toddler and be done with the upcomming story.
    While the grammar is well and not much to be complained about, the style of the whole thing ismight dicourage many people. Sometimes basically the whole chapter is a spread sheet of skill the MC got while doing nothing. The writing style feels unemotional and reflects the whole story and maincharacters.
    While I wouldn't call it a badly written book I'm entirely unsure what the intentions with this book were. Reminded me a bit of Neverland, just the children being the monsters? Well whatever.
  • RocksNPebblesRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The system seems nonsensical with most of it being pointless. Only tiers make any difference, levels mean nothing in skills and might as well not exist. Tier 1 level 1 is identical to tier 1 level 9, this is silly and a waste of time. Might as well just have a percentage or exp number to truly level up to the next tier.
    I dislike pointless numbers, it shows contempt or ignorance of the genre. Same with her stats...what do they mean? She should be accidentally breaking things. All pointlessly high numbers, it could all be 10 times less and it'd be the same. These are silly anime figures with a power level of 100,000 super saiyan. Why can't she ask extremely basic questions like what is a normal adult strength stat? She has a trusted person, but she's also a child and can ask, but does not. She's an idiot. She also does not act her age as a serial reincarnated being, annoyed at small things and simplistic moral thoughts.
    Her jumping is ridiculous at 20m. She can jump up 60ft? She can easily jump to the roof of a 5 or 6 story building? This is like 3 times better than spiderman! She could pulverise most enemies just by jumping away from their bodies.
  • CosmorosRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Okey with more chapters worse it gets. I considered it interesting, but now I do not. Author feels like is writing whatever comes to his head without any plan.
    MC is weird:
    She supposedly lived for thousands of lives as various entities from stone to Zerg like creatures. But she acts in quite a weird way. She acts aloof and indifferent to others but displays a protective instinct towards the kids from the orphanage.
    She is also quite violent and quite brutally kills quite a few people who wronged her or present danger to her. Also, the system is not helping her by giving her all those kill quests.
    Aware of mind-influencing magic, she aims to keep her secrets, yet she discloses a significant amount to vulnerable individuals who can be mind controlled or already were before. She takes insane risks with quite questionable goal. This trend continues to go on, she acts like she barely lived 10 years, not thousands of lives. It's getting ridiculous how many people know her secrets. At this point she can just make a card that tells everything about her and throw it at people. Why not?
    She decided to help 4 kids who tried to bully her (because she is half elf). She helped them to get skills that she is not supposed to have with her upbringing, unless she is a reincarnee. (They do exist in that world so it's not unique situation. But she is unique due to amount of lives she lived.)
    This backfires on her when she gets outed for helping them later on due to mind magic. Also, I'm not sure why she decided to help them. It was quite unexpected, felt random.
    Then she tells her secrets and skill to another girl that does not have any mind protection. More and more people know her secrets, its getting ridiculous.
    Some scenes are really violent:
    Some graphic scenes are described quite in a detail. So, if this is something you don't enjoy, this is not for you. This is a warning. Author also apparently loves making grotesque scenes so this not going to get any better.
    System:
    With it i