Settlement of Safehaven - A Hearthtree Series

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Description

"Welcome to the ECS Asgard, your ride through the stars to your new home-"Or so goes the sales spiel of this one of four and first-produced colonization ship, a spiel meant to placate the portions of humanity who would be selected for such a journey through the stars.It was meant to be a simple thing; people would sleep in hibernation or stasis, to experience their lives within the virtual reality world which kept their minds occupied. The virtual world was meant to simulate a fantasy world of Viking or Roman lore.But not all with this virtual world was fine; nor were the humans who were selected for its maiden and only voyage. One colonist lost everything dear to him, but through his pain and torment, he gained the attention of the colony ship's AI.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
R E Trumble

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYVIRTUAL REALITYADVENTUREMAGICSCI-FIGAMELITMALE LEADKINGDOM BUILDINGHIGH FANTASYMYTHOSSTRATEGYDUNGEON CORE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
206
Views
86,650

Chapters(38 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • RoarroRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Very good story for fans of settlement/city building. Grammar is proper(not always but author is editing and fixing stuff). Buildup is slow and kinda realistic,MC grows and learns. Very enjoyable read for me.
  • Mister BillRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Good read! Lots of base building stuff and that’s fun. Good worldbuilding. Good action scenes and a fun little take on the genre.
    Give it a shot and don’t mind the editing.
  • whoeverRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    It's quite hard to assign this story an overall score. The quality differs a lot between the chapters. The story itself has caught me quite early, but while some chapters are quite addicting, others are hardly readable. Sometimes grammer is quite an issue. But even the story itself has very different levels of quality. Sometimes very fun to read. Sometimes a garbled mess making no sense at all.
    Overall it feels like the story has much potential, but it just is not materializing.
  • HamsterDesTodesRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    This story came out of its hiatus a short time ago, so I thought to write a review. The bad news is, no editor was found. The good news is, the tale stays interesting:
    The english is still seriously bad, even  (free!) Grammarly would help tremendously. My guess is the author uses a speech-to-text program because the massive ammounts of homonyms are pretty much inexplainable otherwise.
    Grammarly wont catch everything of course, but even simply typos and switched words are so abundand in this story that it would be an enormous improvement.
  • KagenestiRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I like the story but your time skips are so bad I couldn't keep reading. I mean you have days and weeks and days go by in the same chapter. We can't really get a great handle on how much he can build per hour but common. It shouldn't have taken him a month or 2 to build a shell of a house when he has magic.
    Then in chapter 5 he is crying over his family at the end of the paragraph then next sentence he is dancing a jig.
  • demionRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I had to stop reading because of the bad grammar and some jumps in the story... you should get an editor. would like to continue after some proofreading has been done!
    the background of Jack and the little bit of worldbuilding so far sounds interesting