Selenia: Eventually I Will Rule it all!

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Being reborn to a useless father that had attempted to assault her, quickly after ending his own life, leaving her all alone, Selenia sets off on her own. In less than a day, she ended up being enlisted in the military!?

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: IllyasArt

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Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 87
Views: 99,143

Chapters(100 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

KiraKiraKiraRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
After seeing that it has only a single review, I took it as a challenge to try and see it for myself.
Honestly, it started okayish. Ideally you should read it with a completely turned off brain, not question anything. The style of narration is quite bland but considering that it is being told from a perspective of a broken with little emotions person it could be a good trick if executed right (here it felt like an accident). It reads as a diary "I did that and then that" - almost no descriptions or depth to anything. But it is also kinda amusing to see the stupidity that happens, it is clearly a parody and every once in a while MC also makes fun of ridiculous things happening around.
The first half of the story has only one sex scene, which did not involve the MC. After that it becomes just porn without any focus on the actual story.
The story clearly misses the tag Harem as their relationship is obviously centered only around MC.
The characters around MC directly stated multiple that they are not pedos, and MC has disgust towards such people too. At the same time the same characters promise to marry the young girl below 10 and lust after her. Excuse me? Even though the girl has hazy memories of her previous life of an adult, you can't write a character that says "I love you for your mind, not body" and then in the next paragraph lust after that person. Sorry, you can't lust after the brains of a person in a kid body and want to have sex with them while gazing at their body like a maniac and saying you are not a pedo. The topic is too serious to make a parody or joking of it. Considering other "jokes" in the story, I assume it was an exaggeration on author part and behind this "lusting" was just authors joke that nothing bad would actually happen. This is a very thin ice.
The harem part (second half of the story) was hinted during the first half, but I did not expect that the story would get lost completely.
If I were to summarize it quickly: bland with simple langu
RadekRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
It starts fine, but later I found myself just browsing through the chapters, since the story disappeared with a bit of misleading synopsis.
After a while chapters have become:
- 4 lesbians f#cking each other in every chapter who due to a blessing, by a lesbian goddess are overpowered.
Too young? Author have an answer:
Age Up potions.
Wanna immortality ?
Age stop potion + marry a lesbian witch (they are lesbians, because males can't stop aging and wield magic - plot hole: looks like marrying a witch and age stop potions works only on women here? Even though we learn that somebody was extending his lifespan).
Power scalling? Is it edible? Sorry but here 1 person just after receiving a blessing can wipe out about 5000 soldiers by herself, who spend most of their life training and learning how to wield weapons...
Apparently blessed people can eat about 1000-2000 meals each from a single place and then they don't have to eat for years, unless they burn it all, by activities... Reality a little please? Such amount of food would be problematic for army logistics and an inn would definitely not have that amount of food just waiting + it takes time to cook... It would take days of non stop cutting and cooking to prepare them, but for you it took only a while?
In short:
It is story about women's who care only about themselves and are overpowered.
Hoped for something else, like a story of slowly climbing the ranks, meaningful campaigns, hard working and developed side characters personalities, with a wars affecting them, causing changes - you won't find it here...