[Second Saga]

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Welcome to the new world and a second chance and being you. Dive into this new fantasy adventure and create your new self! Treasure? Adventures? Dragons? Demons? Everything awaits you in your new life.Landon was born only to have his parents die at a young age. Without a memory of them he is raised at an orphanage and a new family is created in his heart. In a world where money controls everything, he must somehow find a way to bring his family happiness and one day he gets the chance he's been dreaming off. He join's Second Saga's VRMMO and fights with no experience in the gaming world. With no money, no power, and no experience he must persevere to change the fate that others had already given up on.Not long after joining the game, an accident occurs and he is killed at level 1. However it's suppose to be impossible to die at level 1, thus the impossibility grants him a the skill that will become his first step to being a Core Gamer.---------------------------------------------------------Please support me by reading on my site panunitestheworld.wordpress.comHope you enjoy it~chapter size 1500-2000~Contains some swearing Viewer discretion is advised

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Arcares

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

Shadow ReaverRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is quite an entertaining story, it feels like I'm reading Ark again from the captivating humour and fights.
It also feels like Insania online because the story has a silly protaganist. Any way hail the Bread God and Cygnas! For cookies and bread!
TreyonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Well… since i like what im reading im giving you my current score… i have read 34 chapters to the date of this post and i have commented a full wall of text on practically each chapter to put my opinion on things…
Well, the story so far its good, its like a sclice of life in a virtual game… Not much is happening really so this makes the world you have seem small, so some comments of the players or even rumors of certain things that happens either in game or in reality can help makes the world bigger if used correctly, making those rumors appears sometimes while Hydra is walking in the town and such… rumors or comments like what is happening in the country (real world one)… like crime is getting higher in certain zones and it just happens to be the one that hydra lives… so he has to be careful for theft and the safety of his sister and his own…
Comments and rumors about whats happeing inside game like, did you hear, XXX found a hidden cave located at YYYY but was owned right after finding it!…. or did you hear that the town mayor is currently asking adventures to get iron ores in great quantities?, this could either lead to Hydra going to gather some ore, or in a later date it will lead to a quest about transporting finished armor to the frontier or something.
I like the interactions of Hydra with the NPCS… its clearly different than most other players so it would be a good contrast if you could display other players opinions or actions regarding the NPCs… like finding another party that has NPCs with them and they dont treat them as a person at all (used person instead of human since they are other races and person is something more general) or seen that NPCs are almost always ignored if its not realated to some quest… (THIS IS TIPICAL)…
As for the current pet of Hydra i do hope that he does more than finding random stuff in the floor sometimes…. well i wanted to say other things but they are not currently in my mind so meh… will add things on the comments on the ch
SpartanLokiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So I picked this story up recently and quickly started devouring it. Loved the story, sure it is another poor boy among many rich people but that start isn’t really bad and I really can’t complain about it because it allows the author to have more about the game instead of real life when the main character is a “Dark Gamer”. Hydra is a nice character who cares about his friends and wants to improve a in whatever he is doing which is respectable. Wow feel like I am rambling now…. Grammar is not bad could use a finer comb through of the chapters but overall nothing to complain about. The humor is friendly and fun and I am happy to see a story that doesn’t include a ton of sex. Wow, very all over the place but all i can say is the story is really good and more should check it out. Oh one more thing, when did he learn martial arts? That wasn't explained.
DouieRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
this is one of the best stories i have read, including the sub topic of bread
Mr.WhiteCalciumRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
MC is not Op but manages to survive all the time.Rich Characters.But He seems to have no friends in the world other than the Guild maniacs.Regular Chapters.All around its pretty well done.give this a read
opusknightRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Dud writing is one of the hardest, simplist, and horrifying thing anyone can do. Do not let others kill your joy.
I'mean enjoying the ride. I've written a lot of really bad books that will never ever see the light (they r really bad pieces of $*%+) you have a gift share it with those who enjoy it. pass on those that do nothing but not hate.
Remember true writing starts at the 1st re--write ie. Success (money )
AziroFFRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's a good story…..as i don't like some things about your story can't give you 5 stars, sorry, keep it going
Bookworm7Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The story starts well with good build up and good humour and if you're after a light, fun, silly read this is right for you!
But
the characters are generally shallow and tend to go with the flow. I also found that most of the female love interests are simply repeats of one another. Sarah while kind and shy is domineering towards the main char at different times. Irina is also the same, with a kind personality but still dominates the relationship with the main character. Pan however is a very original character in my opinion.
I like how the story goes from one adventure to another but i don't like how there are no breaks. It seems poor Hydra never gets a break, always falling into someone else's scheme. Fast paced stories are good but even the best of this type have rest chapters where not much happens except character building. There have also been very few chapters on real life recently. These would be good rest chapters.
Overall I like this story. Its full of fun ideas and exciting pacing. But the characters are shallow and the constant stream of one major danger after another is a bit repetitive. I admit I didn't get up to date on this story and only got about 61 Chapters in but this is where I stop. I like my stories a bit deeper for more emersion
BloagRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I really appreciate high ouput as a reader. Binge reading is part of my day. The problem with fast writing is very often quite visible. Quality suffers a lot in various ways.
1. Grammar
The amount of errors differ between chapters. Sometimes I had the feeling the author did not reread the chapter while other parts looked just fine. So be prepared to to see quite a few issues in this regard. Over all I'd say it's RR average, with later chapters improving.
2. Story
It's a convinient VR story which borrows from other novels. The need for money and playing a game reminded me of LMS to some extent. But such things do not bother me. The thing with this story is this:
If you do not think too much, it is pretty enjoyable to read. If you follow the "dark" path and spend some thoughts on world building (real and VR), game mechanics, character decisions and story flow one could also argue that this novel is a big pile of flaws and inconsistencies. There is almost no chapter without a "logic bug".
Why is that? Well, I guess the quantity demanded a cutback in quality
3. The characters
Well, yeah... I don't know. With the backround the mc and his sisters could be less boring and cliched. There are a lot of things not told so for me it's hard to feel an attachement to the characters with all the simplified interaction.
All in all I read through to chapter 39. I do not feel compelled to follow the story. The mc just acts in my opinion as a stupid crybaby. Shouldn't he earn money? Why is he suddenly some martial arts genius out of nowhere?
I guess after a rework the story could be very good. And now I am reminded of all the things which made no sense.... Feels like a neverending story....
norath84Royal Road
★ 0.5
Using the stupid "24h Logout on death" penalty that plagues many VRMMO stories.
Please help cure this plague as many stories would be much better off with out it.