Scenario 66

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Silven isn’t too happy when he stops to consider his miraculous prison escape, a guiding voice on the air and the herd of terrifying black knights hunting him down and realises he may be important. Equally, he’s not going to be too happy when he learns he’s nothing more than a character in a video game in chapter 3.8. There’s just no pleasing some people.

But by the time of this realisation, Silven is all-powerful and all-arrogant, with a couple of game-breaking businesses under his belt. And when he finally understands he has been meddling with the very fabric of his own reality, the damage may already have been done.

This fiction contains:

* Approx. 4,342,213 video game tropes, mechanics and cliches

* Very light levelling and business development (but no tables. Other than the one on the cover).

* A rather acquired taste in dry, sarcastic humour.

* 0 dragons. Why no dragons, man?

Chapters will be released EVERY DAY, in order to sufficiently punish you for all the bad things you've done in life.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2018
Author: Sidewelter

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 27
Views: 41,690

Chapters(54 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

UnderloadRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A gem, a diamond in plain sight; but people like blue crystals more! A tragedy!
[Excuse my english.]
Title: This is a diamond, which most are not going to read becasue it doesn't have shiny blue screens. The title is in plan sight, though the cover seems childish, the content isn't, but only me and a handful of people will know this. But when you look closely at the cover you will notice it says more about the story than it seems on the first glance.
The mice is standing behind a wall and it make me remember how the advisery to the king in bygone era used to stand behind, hidden, but were actually the real rulers most of the time.
But, still most are just going to smash there heads against the litrpg which clutters this site.
Okay, now onto the scores;
1. Style: No biggie here. its simple, but the flow is great. Better even are the words which describes the lore. But i'm cutting a point because of how little emotion there is in the story. No matter what he say's the characters sometimes feels grey with no words describing their colors. But this is not a character flaw, bu rather a style one, becasue in the end silvian is a thinking character, not simply a avatar.
2. Grammer: Threre might be mistakes. But I don't think there are. And i'm not qalified enough to say he oculd have done better, becasue i couldnt have even done this much.
(I'm not big on this review thing. This is my first advanced review, sorry:p)
3. Story: I dived straight into the story without reading the summary and i think it worked a lot better for me by not knowing what kind of world it was and how human silvian is. Its a ride folks, so read, dammit!
4. Character: up until (2.1) the characters have been kind of amazing. Though the base tone to all of them is similar, yet everyone of them comes out as different. There are the mice, the villagers, the marsh people, the socerer, and i peronaly liked how the church guard was written. He opening line sent me in a chuckling frenzy.
All in all, if you ga