Sarsaparilla's Scary Super Power. Completed
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Sarsaparilla is an older teenage girl living on Mars. And, like many other young people around her, she has a super power. Or, rather, she issupposedto have a super power. Only she has never been able to activate it, she doesn’t even know what her super power is. This annoys her, tremendously. But she hides this behind a really sweet smile.
Adalace is another teenage girl, also on Mars. She knows what her own super power is, and it is quite a good one. She is also really cute… so long has she keeps her feelings under control and doesn’t let out anything from her dark past.
Teylon is a man, currently living on Earth. He likes to think of himself as still young, even if he is over fifty. He’s a bit smug about his successful career and is thinking of retiring… until a sadly unfortunate event leads him to the conclusion that he had better immigrate to Mars. Immediately. Apparently, meeting one’s own Angel of Death tends to cause people to make profound changes to their lives…
Mars society had better brace itself, because once these three people, plus another three also not so quite stable individuals, collide with each other, the resulting explosion is not going to leaveanyoneon Mars unaffected.
This is another Esmeralda, the Angel of Death, story. It follows on from my previous two such stories, but it is in no way dependent on the previous stories. They can be read in any order.
It is fully written and proof read (using Word for Windows, no real editor touched this transcript) and comes to about 247,000 words (about 895 Royal Road pages). It is organized into 50 chapters and I will be publishing them roughly one per day.
In my writing, there are multiple characters and multiple points of view. Each change in a point of view is introduced by a header, giving the viewpoint character’s name first, and possibly a title. Inside a Point of View section, dialog initalicsrepresents the Point of View character’s thoughts, while dialog between quotes represent normal spoken dialog.
This story is very much inspired by the anime A Certain Scientific Railgun. However I have only taken some elements from the anime, and changedeverythingI took to make my own story, and so it does not count as fanfiction.
Yeah, I know, the book cover page isn’t very good. It’s the best I could do, by tracing over a stock image. The two ladies shown are supposed to be Adalace and Sarsaparilla. Ideally I would have liked there to be two images of this pair, one where they are smiling sweetly and looking cute, and one where they are looking really angry and dangerous. But that totally exceeds my graphics abilities. You will just have to imagine it.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- DavidWynne
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 19
- Views
- 49,947
Chapters(50 total)
- Chapter 50: Relaxing at dusk with a glass of wineJul 6, 2019
- Chapter 49: Who was this Trickster, anyway?Jul 6, 2019
- Chapter 48: Just a visit by a little family group to the Frenzy.Jul 6, 2019
- Chapter 47: Time rolls on, things keep on happeningJul 6, 2019
- Chapter 46: What do you do when you suddenly become the rulers of Mars?Jul 5, 2019
- Chapter 45: Having a robust conversation with the committeeJul 5, 2019
- Chapter 44: Catching a maglev to Futures CityJul 5, 2019
- Chapter 43: More deaths due to the ArtifactJul 4, 2019
- Chapter 42: Adalace decrypts the USB stickJul 4, 2019
- Chapter 41: Planning the visit. And what to do when they get there.Jul 4, 2019
- Chapter 40: Leroy apologises to Candide.Jul 3, 2019
- Chapter 39: At last, Teylon gets a clue as to the location of the committeeJul 3, 2019
- Chapter 38: The committee reluctantly start planning for a visitJul 2, 2019
- Chapter 37: Everybody realises that now is the time to do somethingJul 1, 2019
- Chapter 36: Devina has a few words with TeylonJun 30, 2019
- Chapter 35: Juniper forces some more true confessions from Maggie, Erasyl and DevinaJun 30, 2019
- Chapter 34: Tamara looks to her future.Jun 29, 2019
- Chapter 33: Adalace’s Dark Past comes back and bites herJun 29, 2019
- Chapter 32: All about the Girls in PinkJun 28, 2019
- Chapter 31: Teylon takes the empathy thing to the limitsJun 28, 2019
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Community Reviews(1)
- JRRTRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is the first time that I have written a review on Royal Road. It seems that not that many people have found this book, and in my opinion that is unfortunate. It is well written and entertaining. The characters are properly developed, I don't remember any noticable grammar issues, and overall I suspect that more people would like it if it just had a bit more visibility - which is why I decided to write a review.