Sarsaparilla's Scary Super Power. Completed
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Sarsaparilla is an older teenage girl living on Mars. And, like many other young people around her, she has a super power. Or, rather, she issupposedto have a super power. Only she has never been able to activate it, she doesn’t even know what her super power is. This annoys her, tremendously. But she hides this behind a really sweet smile.
Adalace is another teenage girl, also on Mars. She knows what her own super power is, and it is quite a good one. She is also really cute… so long has she keeps her feelings under control and doesn’t let out anything from her dark past.
Teylon is a man, currently living on Earth. He likes to think of himself as still young, even if he is over fifty. He’s a bit smug about his successful career and is thinking of retiring… until a sadly unfortunate event leads him to the conclusion that he had better immigrate to Mars. Immediately. Apparently, meeting one’s own Angel of Death tends to cause people to make profound changes to their lives…
Mars society had better brace itself, because once these three people, plus another three also not so quite stable individuals, collide with each other, the resulting explosion is not going to leaveanyoneon Mars unaffected.
This is another Esmeralda, the Angel of Death, story. It follows on from my previous two such stories, but it is in no way dependent on the previous stories. They can be read in any order.
It is fully written and proof read (using Word for Windows, no real editor touched this transcript) and comes to about 247,000 words (about 895 Royal Road pages). It is organized into 50 chapters and I will be publishing them roughly one per day.
In my writing, there are multiple characters and multiple points of view. Each change in a point of view is introduced by a header, giving the viewpoint character’s name first, and possibly a title. Inside a Point of View section, dialog initalicsrepresents the Point of View character’s thoughts, while dialog between quotes represent normal spoken dialog.
This story is very much inspired by the anime A Certain Scientific Railgun. However I have only taken some elements from the anime, and changedeverythingI took to make my own story, and so it does not count as fanfiction.
Yeah, I know, the book cover page isn’t very good. It’s the best I could do, by tracing over a stock image. The two ladies shown are supposed to be Adalace and Sarsaparilla. Ideally I would have liked there to be two images of this pair, one where they are smiling sweetly and looking cute, and one where they are looking really angry and dangerous. But that totally exceeds my graphics abilities. You will just have to imagine it.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- DavidWynne
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- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 19
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- 49,947
Chapters(50 total)
- Chapter 30: Teylon takes the true confessions thing to the limitsJun 27, 2019
- Chapter 29: The committee decides Ajaeren’s fate. Sarsaparilla proposes her own holiday idea.Jun 26, 2019
- Chapter 28: A very high energy theatre nightJun 25, 2019
- Chapter 27: The School Theatre NightJun 24, 2019
- Chapter 26: Leroy’s dark past. And Adalace’s.Jun 24, 2019
- Chapter 25: The committee and AjaerenJun 23, 2019
- Chapter 24: Dealing with AjaerenJun 22, 2019
- Chapter 23: Sarsaparilla gets JudgementalJun 21, 2019
- Chapter 22: Maggie and Erasyl get weirdJun 20, 2019
- Chapter 21: Juniper and Kaydence go shoppingJun 20, 2019
- Chapter 20: All about the committeeJun 19, 2019
- Chapter 19: With two more girls to look after - things are getting really difficult.Jun 18, 2019
- Chapter 18: Sarsaparilla’s Super PowerJun 17, 2019
- Chapter 17: When Teylon and co meet the Girls in Pink, again, its Category 5 Warning time!Jun 17, 2019
- Chapter 16: Maggie’s AftermathJun 16, 2019
- Chapter 15: Maggie’s Continuing MisadventuresJun 15, 2019
- Chapter 14: Both Sarsaparilla and Maggie have nasty scares.Jun 14, 2019
- Chapter 13: Adalace and Sarsaparilla ‘help’ Teylon with some more true confession timeJun 13, 2019
- Chapter 12: Adalace and Sarsaparilla start to get along with each otherJun 13, 2019
- Chapter 11: Esp Fight at IronBark DomeJun 12, 2019
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Community Reviews(1)
- JRRTRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is the first time that I have written a review on Royal Road. It seems that not that many people have found this book, and in my opinion that is unfortunate. It is well written and entertaining. The characters are properly developed, I don't remember any noticable grammar issues, and overall I suspect that more people would like it if it just had a bit more visibility - which is why I decided to write a review.