Sandman in MHA

Self-Published

Description

Yuta: I want to become the strongest hero!

The world of MHA: Yeah, about that...

Join Yuta on his perspective journey in the world he only knows...

Patreon: Hunchovroy1

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Kloaken1Royal Road
★ 0.5
There is not a single punctuation in sight, this is a part of a chapter I copied to show what I mean: (“Ahhhhhhhhh!” I screamed out of fear thinking today was my dying wish as my body began streaming down sands all over the room as my mom just bumped in out of nowhere only to see me on the floor without hands and she screamed out of shock seeing my body falling apart as she went numb for a second standing still and she quickly snapped out of her daydreaming and rushed downstairs only to call the school saying my son will be absent as she cut off the call and then proceeded to call an ambulance to come carry her son as she felt some kind of fear which she haven’t felt in her whole life.)
Like, are we serious? This is completely unreadable and the whole book is like this. Don't know if it'll get better but I don't really have that kind of patience with this book.