Runes of creation (A LitRPG Adventure) (currently working on 2nd novel)

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

Lazarik

• Chapter 4
  Apr 13, 2023
• Chapter 3
  Apr 12, 2023
• Chapter 2
  Apr 12, 2023
• Chapter 1
  Apr 12, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(9)

• ZenobiaTayRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Oh, what a thrilling and captivating read! The classic LITRPG style had me hooked from the start, and I couldn't put the book down. The world building was fantastic, and the monsters were vividly described, making me feel like I was right there in the action.
  Style:
  The book has a classic LITRPG style, including monsters, systems, and violence. The writing style was so entertaining and well-done that I found myself completely immersed in the story. The author has a talent for creating a gripping plot that kept me engaged and eager to see what would happen next.
  Story:
  The story is a classical LITRPG with a hostile world and monsters, featuring a main character and a few select others. I would highly recommend this book to anyone who loves a good adventure, epic battles, and well-written characters. This story is a magical journey full of excitement, mystery, and action that is sure to leave you wanting more.
  Grammar:
  The book has no apparent grammar issues, and although the formatting could use some work, the spelling is fine. It's evident that the author has put in a lot of effort to improve their craft, and I can't wait to see what they come up with next!
  Character:
  The character development was exceptional, and each character was well-differentiated and fully realized. I loved getting to know the main character and their companions, and watching them grow and evolve throughout the story was a true delight.
• EJ_Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This RoyalRoad Fantasy, Runes of Creation, has the twist of a "Jester" class MC.  Couple the class with a bound Jester Spirit Mask and the illusions come out in triplicate!  I am currently at chapter 7 and already the worldview and supporting characters have depth and interest.  I am looking forward to continuing enjoying the read.
• ScruffedUpRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Edits were made to the System, looks much better now!
  Style:
  The novel follows the classic LITRPG style, monsters, systems, bit of gore and violence, whole lotta screaming. (mostly from me). Its written well and the style is entertaining. 5/5
  Story:
  Classical LITRPG, hostile world story. We got a main character a few select others, we got monsters, we got bloodshed. One way or the other the story is gonna have a lot of screamin'! I love LITRPG novels, and have probably read half of the ones on the site, even the small ones as of late. I have no complaints about the story so far.
  Grammar:
  I have seen nor made note of any grammar issues, while I think some of the formatting needs work the spelling is fine, good work. 5/5
  Character:
  The characters read well, I can differentiate them, and I am warming up to them. All I really need for a 5 star. 5/5
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  Overall the story is well written, enjoyable and the new edits have made the System itself much more pleasing to read, and much easier to comprehend mid story. This simply shows that the author is both willing to take criticism and willing to improve. 5/5 stars off of that alone.
  Overall 5/5, look forward to the story as it progresses
• BurlRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Very enjoyable story with a good amount of litrpg elements.
  The relationships seem genuine, my main complaint is that I want more ;)
  There is magic, but without a lot of the complicated bits. It's simple and effective.
  The real area that shines for me is the relationship between the MC and his love interest and that between him and his bonded spirit. The latter was a unique element and something that I'd like to see more of.
  Overall a quick (so far) but excellent read!
• ABEXUSRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The story is very well thought out from the start because from no point in the story did I dislike the MC and he seems to have many sides to him that are just so interesting to read and learn about. The other characters even some that you see just for a chapter or two don't feel like just throwaway characters and actually contribute to the overarching narrative of the first part.
  The fight scenes are fleshed out properly and the flow of battle is good while not making the writing seem confusing which is a big plus especially with how the MC's abilities work.
  I am really excited for part 2 of this story and I can't wait 👍👍
• FastFoodNationRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Shitty day? Certainly waking up in a prison cell takes the cake.
  We are presented a new and magical world for our main characteer to discover. He will learn to survive and do magic tricks. That means adventure and more adventure. Not much elese is revealed at the time, but a deeper plot seems to be brewing. I can just say, character development, introductions, interactions, fighting, etc., is done nicely. Absolutely recommended!
• PxslRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Dialogue isn't formatted right, hard to tell when one person's speech ends and another person begins. The blue boxes are extremely skinny to where only 3 words fit per line. (on phone)
  good story, just hard to read, reviews must be at least 50 words long, reviews must be at least 50 words long
• Valladra StormbornRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Pretty damn solid overall. I personally have some issues with some of the way characters react (or don't) to events or actions other characters take, but it doesn't take away from the overall story or world design, and I do find most of the cast interesting.
  Definitely recommend to fans of the genre overall.
• MrGrassRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The story seems to want to be many things. Does them decently well until it doesn't.
  Characters are a bit too simple and could do with more personality. They seem to be archetypes of characters, rather than actual characters.
  I liked the scene where he pretends to be scary. I think the story should have leaned into that, but it went in a different direction.
  Overall: 4/5, but it isn't really my vibe so I don't think I will be reading any more. But, I would recommend it to any adult litRPG fan.
  Story: 4/5
  Characters: 3/5
  Style: 4/5
  Grammar: 4.5/5