Romance - plus Judgemental Powers? Completed
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Blue was a red headed boy who desperately wanted a girlfriend. So he asked the class beauty to walk home with him.
She very nicely refused him.
So he asked another girl in the same class, one with an average rating in the social status ranking.
She also refused him.
So, still desperate, he thinks – “I’m probably at the bottom of the ranking for boys in this class, so how about I ask the girl who is also at the lowest ranking?”
The girl’s name was Pink.
She said yes.
Gulp. “What do I do now?” was his reaction.
Well, obviously, have a romance.
And, along the way, they get one hell of a lot more than they bargained for.
Like, for example, supernatural Judgemental Powers. How did they get those?
And that was only the start.
The two most insignificant students in their class become famous. Not just in their class or even in their school, but to the population at large. They end up breaking and making the top politicians and rulers of their country.
But finally, of course, they get what they wanted. A committed relationship.
This is an Esmeralda the Angel of Death story. It follows on from my previous novel “Maybe it would have been a good idea not to wish for a harem?”, however it is a totally separate story with only a minimal overlap in the characters. There is no need to read the first story to enjoy this one.
Although you just might enjoy the first story also…
This story has multiple characters and multiple Points of View. Every POV change is clearly marked with a new header. Inside each POV section, the POV character’s thoughts are initalics.
This story has about 105,000 words (about 380 RoyalRoad pages). It is fully written and proof read (the poor man’s proof read using Word). It has 25 chapters, and will be published at the rate of roughly one chapter per day.
The front-page photo is byValentin AntonuccifromPexels
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- DavidWynne
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 18
- Views
- 29,432
Chapters(26 total)
- Announcement: another New Fiction AvailableJun 4, 2019
- Chapter 25: EpilogueApr 20, 2019
- Chapter 24: Pink and Blue lay down the lawApr 20, 2019
- Chapter 23: The premiers try again... and failApr 19, 2019
- Chapter 22: The Hippy Love Boat IncidentApr 18, 2019
- Chapter 21: The premiers get seriousApr 17, 2019
- Chapter 20: The escape, with a little helpApr 16, 2019
- Chapter 19: Things get desperateApr 15, 2019
- Chapter 18: Three very unhappy girlsApr 14, 2019
- Chapter 17: Esmeralda runs out of quotaApr 13, 2019
- Chapter 16: Cleaning up the loose endsApr 12, 2019
- Chapter 15: Defusing the situationApr 11, 2019
- Chapter 14: A highly explosive situationApr 10, 2019
- Chapter 13: The recruitment of MollyApr 9, 2019
- Chapter 12: Pink becomes class repApr 8, 2019
- Chapter 11: Rebecca's and James's dark pastsApr 7, 2019
- Chapter 10: Rebecca and JamesApr 6, 2019
- Chapter 9: Pink adopts a motherApr 5, 2019
- Chapter 8: Pink and Blue keep on becoming well knownApr 4, 2019
- Chapter 7: Their first Judgemental caseApr 3, 2019
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Community Reviews(2)
- ZekRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Loving it! a bunch of unique characters doing a unique job. Very good.
- IbskibRoyal Road★★ 1.5Blue and Pink are just cringeworthy names, both too anime-esque and painfully bland (yeah I get this is a story about a boy and a girl, you don't need to color code them).
Made even weirder by everyone else apparently having normal names. It kept ruining any chance of immersion for me.
I dropped it quickly, it reads like the author has watched too much anime and morning cartoons, and not read enough litterature. The lacklustre prose seems to bear that out.