Rigel: The Savage World

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Summary

Our lives depend on our dreams. We live for them; we depend on them, and when they shatter, they shatter our spirits. Love is a dream and the most important of all. When it shatters, it shatters more than just our spirit. It shatters our souls

Born a slave, Rigel still dared to dream of love. Stripped of his rights, he lost his love to the fate and then he lost himself avenging her. Thrown into a hellhole, he once again meets his inner demons as he is pitted against the worst of the society.

Dark emotions riddled his heart and violent thoughts plagued his mind. Follow Rigel as he conquers them all in his life's journey where he tries to regain everything he had ever lost

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Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
gsdreddy

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURESUPERNATURAL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
398
Views
110,274

Chapters(34 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • darknebulousRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    great story hope to see more hope you can get an editor save time and work  and  this story is truly  great because put your own style and your own uniqueness into it thanks for all your hark work too
  • DHEERAJ GRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Speaking from the point of view of a Fantasy/Xianxia fan, I can say that Rigel: The Savage world has a very solid foundation. Unlike it's contemporories, it manages to catch the small details and bits of story which are otherwise missing in many fictions making them bland and dry.
    I wasn't really excited to start reading Rigel. However, I didn't find a single negative review on the fiction page. This piquied my interest so I gave it a try and wow, it was a mind blowing work of fiction.
    Detailed characters with a history of their own, powerful back story, intense action, a well rounded and thoughtout lore, a good female main character with actual character, emphasis of emotions, not too Op MC, good grammar and dedicated author who is very transparent with his intentions are some of the strong points of Rigel: The Savage world.
    50 chapters are up, n the future looks promising with a huge plotline and possible epic fantasy. A strong bonding with father/master figure, friendship and possible romance. I think it is an outstanding effort to include all these in just 50 chapters without making the story 2 dimensional.
    A great read with a wonderfully constructed plotline which gives you shivers n smiles
  • HenleyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Keep up the good work bro!
    And good luck with your futur!
  • JayiniRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I found that author wasn't really trying for instant benefit. He was building the world at his pace
    That's kinda awesome and difficult at the same tine. Don't be fooled by the dark chapters at the beginning because the story beyond that is super.
    Read this work
    I highly recommend it.
    Also, thank you Gsd for such an awesome work
  • JmateRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I Am a fan of your works. I made an account specifically for you. Hope you will keep writing.
  • KatachieRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Your story is cool
  • ShivajiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    After reading the sybopsy, I was expecting a rather dark tale but it took turns quickie to become one of the most interesting stories out here on royal road. I like the world setting and the way, the author depicts the dark emotions of humans.
    Rigel isn't you foolish Main character. He is a bit cunning, intelligent, a lot more mature. Also, he is cruel and I like it.
    Spoiler alert :
    Frank is a instant hit. Rudra and tal are mysterious. Rudra divine will which could sweep an entire plane. That's one of my favourites.
    All in all, it is a definite read. Grammar isn't very good but it won't ruin you experience.
    Good luck.
  • SiruRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    So I had always wanted to read a xinaxia story wherre themain character isn’t a asshole, rapist n has some sensible mind. Guess what? That’s exactly what Rigel is.
    The story starts with a compelling plot, an attractive angle of approach, a theme of poisons never used before. Just when we think, i know what’s gonna happen, the author stuns you with the twist.  You see Rigel’s mind games, strategies n then jUST as you think, that’s a proven plotline, he once again suprises you.
    This is just glimpse i can give without spoiling your fun.
    38 chapters in and i am waiting for more every single day. I won’t ask you to read because if you are looking for good books, sooner or later, you will eventually stumble upon Rigel.
  • AbhayraghavaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    OK. So I am writing this review after reading 28 chapters.
    Story : 5/5
    As a work of an original author, it is deep. There is mystery, action, dark emotions and much more. I don't know why but I like it. I am particularly fond of the interaction between Rigel and Rudra. Even though they both have dark sides, they have their fun. It's a good contrast to the dark side of the story shown in the beginning. Trust me, it gets sunny later on.
    Character - 5/5
    I like Rigel, I like Frank, I like Rudra, I like Tal and I even like the idiotic Ravel. Each character has its own unique style which makes then so lifelike. I absolutely love the character development.
    Style - 5/5
    Very similar to Riddick which I absolutely love so there are no complaints in this area.
    Grammar - 4.5/5
    Not the best grammar out here in RRL but doesn't ruin your experience. The authri improved drastically since his first work. There is a ton of improvement when compared to Authors first work.
    Overall - 5/5
    Trust me, read it. Expect a Chinese novel style development but not abruptly. The novel is like a slow Poison, it slowly evolves and makes you want more.
    Suggestions :
    1) Hire an editor. It reduces your work
    2) I want more action
    3) continue your awesome work.
    Note : I pledged 1$ for your dream. Hope others do as well. Your work definitely deserves more than this but sorry I am still a student.
  • ZvonimirRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    So far looks promising ( 4 chapters in ).  Looks and feels more polished then your earlier story. Story has a nice premise and i look forward to seeing more of it.  Keep at it.