Replay of the Odysseys: The GTI Chronicles

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This story is about a man’s true story and his imagination.

Luke, an ordinary boy that lives on by enjoying his life hears a tragedy. GTI SMP, a MMORPG game that he has been playing since his youth is ending soon. After hearing the news, Luke was stuck in sadness and depression but he had to move on with his life. He couldn't just live as a boy who cries over simple video games. It was his time to finally grow up. But the emptiness that was there could never be replaced. One day, a guy named Peace texts Luke. Peace was the owner of the game, GTI SMP. When Luke opened the text, he received a message that was both surprising and extraordinary. It was a offer from Peace to become the main character of a story that he is trying to write for the reopening of the game. Although Luke thought this was suspicious, he accepted it. After a few days, Luke somehow fell into the world of the game that he used to play with his core memories being lost. Although it was confusing, Luke was still very happy that he was able to "Replay" the game that was his favorite. When he got up and got ready to do some work, a young man around his age approached him. He pointed a sword on Luke and asked him,"Who are you? And how did you get here?"

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  • wjsehrtlehrwkRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story overall is pretty interesting but using the concept of "Being in the world of the game" is already pretty common. But there are some unique points so it's pretty good. Might need some improvement on grammar. The interaction that happens between the main character's friends in real life and the new friends that he makes in the server is also one of the key points. I think the author should mostly focus on having consistent upload terms and equal length of the chapter. Like some chapters are 2500 words but some are 1700. I think it would be enough if it had 2200 per chapter but having it longer is always better. Just make sure to have a good pace on the story. Don't make the chapters too lengthy but also have lack of things going on in the story. I know this is only like the beginning of the story so it might be kind of boring but I think when it get's farther in, it will definitely be more entertaining to read. I definitely think this book has potential. If you like fantasy books that have systems, I would definitely recommend. Although this book has a 3.5 rating, it's actually not that bad.