Reincarnation Luna (On Hiatus)
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
What happens when the brilliant Nymph is reincarnated as a rare Blood Elf capable of using mana freely? What happens when that Elf desires to take revenge? What secrets will be revealed about the past and what lies in the future?
*Image by ngt*
**Edited by Teddi Cook**
***Put on hiatus***
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Luna Star
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 207
- Views
- 81,161
Chapters(22 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- BlobofjelloRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0A nice, light read.
Ratings on this site are quite strange. They range from extremely critical to overly lenient. This story is quite good. Easily better than some of the more popular ones on this site (the ones that are simply popular because of the release speed). It definitely deserves more than its current three stars. - Good WitchRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This was such a good series and it's been two months since the hiatus started, I didn't even realise there was a lack of character development.
- saganatsuRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The story is generally good, but one main things is holding it back:
Things happen around luna, and sometimes to luna, but luna never seems to be driving events. This both leads to a disjointed sense of flow (griffin core appears with no warning, random arrogant girl appears for no reason then never shows up again, she gets randomly picked up as a student twice) and a poor sense of luna as a character (I know more from being told about her than from her actions).
As a more minor note, the world building is frayed around the edges. It has interesting concepts, but you get questions like why would blood elves be able to absorb cores randomly, why the sect - osiccorRoyal Road★★★ 3.0the story's start remind me of SOTR on wuxiaworld.
Please develop the character more. until then the highest i can give is 3 star for plot and good grammar.