Reincarnation Gone Wrong

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Description

Yuki Died. Her Killer? An inter-dimensional Serial Killer.

Now she's been reincarnated, but after a fewslightlybad assumptions during character creation, she's ended up as a rabbit in a dark fantasy world.

Our intrepid heroine must brave mountains of fluff and the machinations of an old adversary if she's to live out the magic filled adventure of her dreams! Can she overcome the meddling of the church or the siren's call of ear-scritches long enough to find out what's going on with this busted system?

Find all this and more in Reincarnation Gone Wrong!

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Awesomely Rotund Elf

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 745
Views: 175,353

What readers say about Reincarnation Gone Wrong

“This story starts out with the MC living in her home burrow, she knows there is a system but she has to wait 1000 days to grow up and it up to her. She grows a bit and accidentally partially unlocks it and finds she can speed things up and the numbers start…”
MarindaMannRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“Fun and cute MC and a lot of mystery around the world itself, world building is very good so far and the characters just as much so, very much looking forward to see where the story leads. I think the story doesn't take itself too seriously either, which wo…”
MultiplicityRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(5)

MarindaMannRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story starts out with the MC living in her home burrow, she knows there is a system but she has to wait 1000 days to grow up and it up to her.
She grows a bit and accidentally partially unlocks it and finds she can speed things up and the numbers start to slowly go up and she meets humans.
I'm liking the style of the authors prose and major wattership downs vibe going on in the early stages.
MultiplicityRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Fun and cute MC and a lot of mystery around the world itself, world building is very good so far and the characters just as much so, very much looking forward to see where the story leads. I think the story doesn't take itself too seriously either, which works to its benefit.
ZagarothRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
((Copied from the previous version of the story, all remains true at this point, I will revise again later if I need to, but I expect this version to be even better.))
The story is silly in many ways, it is meant to be silly, now let go, let the silliness flow through you. Good, good.
*ahem*
Style:
The style is light and fluffy, which is appropriate for most of the story. Upon occasion, it feels like it could be a little tighter and more cohesive, but it's minor and I don't know how to point to where to change anything specific.
Grammar:
On point, few mistakes, and those are quickly corrected.
Story:
This is an interesting and fun spin on Isekai-gone-wrong. It has a balance of plot drive and character drive elements: You can see some future conflicts being set up early on, but a lot of the action is currently focused on what the characters are choosing to do.
Character:
It really shines here. Yuki and [redacted] are fun characters, and every rabbit needs a pet human, right? There is a lot to like about them, but neither one is perfect. They are just trying to live and maybe become better people in the process. And even the characters you don't get to know much about yet have a bit of their personality and history shine through, there are several that I am very, very curious about.
CatgurlRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Good sense of humor, good prose, good grammar, excellent concepts. Some of the dialog is extremely funny.
Story is slow and a bit stretched out and boring in spots - I skimmed those. A lot of action, but it feels somewhat unfocused. I am several chapters in and the plot has barely advanced.
Not a fan of the sexual allusions, which there are a lot of after the rabbit MC makes contact with humans. There is a lot of girl on girl sexual focus, slipping into bondage allusions at one point and again in the penultimate chapter I read - ew - not what I was expecting in a bunny story (unless written by Hugh Hefner). Also not a fan of harem stories or stories with a sexual focus and this story seems to be veering into that territory.
The main character is painfully stupid/inconsistent on occasion, while other times her memory and brain seem to work fine. For example, MC overhears a conversation that makes it clear her rabbit family is in danger, but this never seems to register; yet she understands other things she overhears just fine and acts immediately - a jarring inconsistency.
I started off really liking Yuki but at this point none of the characters are particularly appealing or likeable to me, including Yuki. All are morally gray to black and all feel somewhat shallow except for Yuki. Jennifer is being slowly fleshed out, but is still a sketch after many chapters. Other characters are still mostly outlines or caricatures - very slow progress. Some machiavellian characters and plotting are starting to show on the horizon, all morally dark, also something I am not a fan of.
So basically this story is much darker and more sexually oriented than I expected. Not a bad story, but not for me.
petRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Ok so the story starts out good girl reborn as a bunny and does "murder" bunny thing's all fine and dandy, until chapter 9-10 when they randomly become forgetful/stupid with no self control and acting if she can't seem to remember anything to save her and her new family's life until she remembers she can easily escape or do some damage, this happens repeatedly when ever she get's captured.
This story is a let down if your looking for non-human MCs as it feel's like the story was suppose to center around the human MC and this is the cute rabbit's "sidekick backstory"
Maybe it will get better in later chapters, I don't know