Reincarnation as ???
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Description
An unassuming highschooler was reincarnated in a fantasy world as an ant. How will he survive?...Well, it probably will involve eating. Lots and lots of eating.And then changing into something else that is NOT an ant.Random evolutions here we go!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Keita123
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 390
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- 180,567
Chapters(22 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- darknesckRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0hahahahaha! good time reading this, and the comments are the best of all, nice one bru, waiting next update ;) keep the good work, the harem tag let the imagination fly! hahahaha!
- Donthebest22Royal Road★★★★ 4.0right now lets start
Style of the story, hmm i can honestly say that i like this book and i want it to improve, the style is evolution/reincarnation very simple, and as i have said before simple is good we readers like simple concepts, that is easy to understand, but the good thing is it's still in the evolution phase you need to use it more as the phase is the most exciting one, it's simple i start as an ant go to a worm butterfly, but from one of the get go's you discover he can make new bodies not just evolve, which is great as this is a unique aspect which adds to the style of the book, being a badass so far at the start it was good then it went bad but all i can say is keep it up as you are improving and i'd like to see you improve more, as there is still alot of unique styles you can adapt to your story as it is still in the evo phase.
Story nothing much to it reincarnated as a lesser creature and by eating can evolve just like Re:Monster, but aside from that it's a simple concept, (WE LIKE SIMPLE!) at a couple of chapters the unique aspect is that he can create bodies from eating a certain amount and actively switch between them be it male or female but the body he is currently in can evolve to further heights but so far it only applies to the body he is in, now aside from that there is not much to go on as he is still in the evo phase, most of the story is just him eating then trying to evolve.
Grammar not much to say here it's readable and only has a few errors, and the sentence structure is easy to read as well as the dialogue so not much to say.
Character, now this needs work you need to develop your character more we have a basic understanding and that's it you have unique characters so don't screw it up and develop them more, and thats all i can say as it's just your typical mc which shouldn't happen as every person should be unique.
overall this is just your typical story with only a couple unique elements in the story, all i can say expand more show t - wraith26Royal Road★★ 2.0i dont really dislike it... its just a little lacking.. the reason i dropped it coz mc is dumb and ignorant even tho hes reincarnated..