Regressor Finally Decides To Become The Ultimate Villain

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Description

Avior is a regressor who's been attempting to save humanity from it's inevitable destruction at the hands of an unknown advanced civilization.

After hundreds of regressions Avior has finally given up on trying to save humanity through heroic actions. Now, as a newborn reborn once more, Avior has decided to take a new path. He won't strengthen humankind by being their Hero, he'll do it by becoming humanity's Ultimate Villain!

Author's Note:

I'm currently taking a break from regular uploads to completely finish this novel before publishing it all in mass. Hope to see you all when that day comes!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Lansdolli

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 146
Views: 61,794

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Community Reviews(4)

OmegawerewolfRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
As said in the title of my review, I personally believe this story deserves to be in the rising star section of Royalroad. Everything about it is great, the character's, story, style, all fantastic. I recommend reading it.
I just have ooooooone small complaint. I dunno if it's a different country thing, but atleast for American english, Villian is spelt Villain. Not sure if that's different elsewhere though.
time looperRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
great novel reminds me of the eminence in the shadows mixed with second chance novels so if you like op protagonists and misunderstandings this is fo you
(the only thing i miss is that we follow the mc in his last loop so its not a time loop novel but not every novel needs to be or should be a time loop story)
Dead_SlimeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Style: Edgy sometimes but mainly comical and sometimes slightly psychological.
Story: At the start there wasn’t that much but during the later chapters there was a huge improvement in both world building and story telling. I think it could definitely go up to 4.5 or 5 star if the first few chapters were reworked and further developed.
I feel like the war time nature of a country could be further expanded on. As well as either expanding the misunderstandings or minimising them depending if you want to lean further into comedy or not.
One thing I loved though was the church its pillars, subterfuge, politics and lore (which I would love to see further expanded). I think if you further planned out the world history you could make the world more interesting. Another thing I think you would benefit from is POV’s from characters much weaker than Mc e.g regular folk. Which is used by quite a few other novel’s with powerful protagonist’s.
P.S More foreshadowing always fun to piece together a story.
Character: Ok character development I think you could further expand on most of them by including small details (this applies to all characters) e.g. What they do in their free time what they like and dislike, random things that slightly annoyed them that day.
Something I very much liked was that chapter when Avior realised he was truly alone in his time loop and the one he loved would never be the same. But other than that he came off as being kind of bland and not really caring what happened. So I think you could lean into to the psychological aspect with the mental trauma of living 1000s of years and watching everything you loved being destroyed on loop. Also how does Avior keep his memory complete.
Grammar: I think it’s gotten better over time with less mistakes. Too which I’d say get it proof read by a friends or family or post the draft on a forum for writers so they can point out mistakes and give feedback.
Overall: I think you could do with going back and redoing the first
lovelesrRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The biggest issue is that the main character acts too much like Cid from Eminence in the Shadows, where he creates an orgainization and then either ignores it or does not believe it to be success without any investigation. He takes no active role in creating a plan nor trying to orchestrate a master villian plan. When he starts out it seems very much like he is going to use the poison Gu technique to create powerfull defenders but then he just ignores and does not care. To the point his own organizations are fighting each out for really no purpose.
Since the main character is supposed to have done this all before multiple times he should be far more mature and used to managing people / projects but that does not seem to be the case.