RECOVER THE JACKPOT - FPS

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Description

Recover The Jackpot: A side story following SWEEP. An Arch Angel Team Leader of Delta Group set within the Scalpel Chronicle Universe.

This is a short story that was submitted to an Indie Magazine, but it was rejected. Therefore, You, my awesome fans and followers on Royal Road can enjoy it! :)

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2023
Author
TJ Lombardi

Tags

LITRPGACTIONADVENTUREANTI-HERO LEADGAMELITMALE LEADSECRET IDENTITYSHORT STORYWAR AND MILITARYGRIMDARKCYBERPUNKGENETICALLY ENGINEEREDSOFT SCI-FIURBAN FANTASYCONTEMPORARYPROGRESSIONSUPER HEROESARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE

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Rating
4.7/ 5.0
Followers
1
Views
466

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • RedMuffinRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story is written in a fast-paced and action-packed style, using short sentences to really amp up the intensity. It keeps you on the edge of your seat the whole time.
    The story follows Sweep, the MC, as he goes on a daring mission to save a kidnapped girl. The stakes are high, and the adrenaline is pumping as Sweep pushes himself to the limit to complete his mission. Each twist and turn keeps readers guessing, ensuring that they are fully immersed in the heart-pounding action. There are tons of unexpected twists and challenges along the way, making it a real rollercoaster of a ride.
    The writing is top-notch, with hardly any mistakes and a clear, easy-to-follow style. The text demonstrates proficient grammar usage, with minimal errors and clear communication. The dialogue feels real and fits perfectly with the story, making it even more exciting.
    Sweep is shown as a total pro, handling tough situations like a boss. He's super dedicated to his mission and his team, which really shines through in the story. And the other characters bring even more depth and excitement to the plot.
    Overall, the story is a thrilling read that will keep you hooked until the very end. The detailed descriptions and fast pace make it feel like you're right there in the action.
    If you're into action and suspense, this story is definitely worth checking out.