Reborn In Modern family as Iron Man!

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Description

Our story follows a guy who is the Twin brother of Hayley Turns out he had already once lived before, After getting his memories and realizing his situations he gets a System,

The Iron Man System.

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Disclamer: This Fanfiction will have multiple plots of it's own, it wont be normal as this novel is meant to be supernatural as suggests the tag

Also in the beginning the writing quality might be low but that will improve as the chapters progress.

Full disclaimer: I do not own the orignal Version of the TV shows and Movies I use as crossover material in this fanfiction, All of that belongs to there respective owner, I Am only responsible for the OC in my Fanfic and the unique events that play out due to it being crossover Worlds And if the Orignal Copyright holder wishes for me to remove there Work, I'll be happy to do so

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Anime sucks jk

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Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(3)

MrkingRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This story is in my opinion worth the read up until around chapter 80. The grammar is okay in the initial chapters because those have been cleaned a bit. I had no problems with not having watched Modern Family but googling 'Modern Family cast' will help.
I am now at chapter 155 and the grammar and spelling mistakes in the further chapters make it very difficult to enjoy. Although I think this could be solved by readers taking the time to point out the mistakes (and the author fixing them).
earthdrakeRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Now, this review may be mistaken as i only read till chapter 11.
Short review
TLDR
PROS:
Having an interesting mixup of genre, not only system but also on a sitcom that will change a lot.
Interesting story and future due to previous point.
For those who have seen Modern Family the setting should be a plus.
Mashup of multiple series is cool
CONS:
Numerous grammatical errors on first 11 chapters.
MC is given genius IQ but behaviour doesn't changes, still makes stupid mistakes.
Poorly written parts where author has almost no knowledge of topic making things incongruous (coding, AI, few other things).
Minor point. Part of the plot is given specifically just for plot and doesn't affect anything else when it should (or at least till chapter 11).
Characters feel 2D not even 2.5D.
Basically, this is basically a powertrip of an OPish MC.
So long version here.
MC is a genius which is incredibly difficult to write and author has not been able to actually do it well. Most genius characters in most novels are also poorly written or are not genius. "Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality" is one of the best examples of a well written genius character that still can be blindsided.
The coding. MC as being a genius starts to code an AI knowing part of the code in a laptop.
There are several issues here, some can be handwaved but others just break the story.
Minor mistake:
To code you need any normal computer and a notepad, maybe an IDE that will help you check your code for stupid errors, a comma missing here, a bracket there. You don't need nor want a supercomputer for coding.
Major error:
To run an AI you need a dedicated system and it runs directly on the processor, it doesn't need an OS like Windows or macOS. If you program an AI for a specific hardware you cannot simply export it to another (this can be partially handwaved due to the System)
Pedantic error (I'm the pedantic one in this case):
AI is used wrongly EVERYWHERE, also here.
AI can be used for a microwave that de
PickyReaderRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
I'll start with the most abundant issue this novel has, it's written in "english". As in the only reason I know this is in English is that the alphabet is the same, it feels like someone got some preschooler or super basic AI to spit out a bunch of "ideas" for what they think sounds cool. You know how if you ask a kid to tell you what superpowers they'd want they just start rambling nonsense that immediately makes no sense but they don't seem to care or notice? Like saying they'd be invisible all the time but also be able to fly and be invincible and have lots of money and be really handsome and popular plus they can teleport? Anyone who thinks for a few seconds (even the kid themselves) would realise that's nonsense and this novel feels that way.
It's written about the old 2000s sitcom "Modern Family" that I only remembered exists after thinking the phrasing in the introduction was really weird even for the broken English, then it's got "iron man" spliced in there for some reason AND a "system" AND he has a past life of some sort, this is all the FIRST chapter. There's so much worldbuilding in this novel that there isn't any worldbuilding in sight.
The summary and title do nothing to prepare you for how poorly written or planned out the novel is and it feels wrong to put this along side "fan fictions" since I very highly doubt a fan of any of these things would ever do this to something they like, an iron Man fan wouldn't try to shove iron Man into an old sitcom where he doesn't belong, some 70 year old man who's a fan of those sitcoms wouldn't try to shove all this modern isekai system style stuff. This feels like an un-fan fiction written as a parody by an ai that wasn't given proper translation software.