Rebirth: From Hero to Commoner

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Description

After slaying a demon king and dying an honorable death, Grey, a hero, was reborn to another realm as a commoner for unknown reasons.

Without knowing his true goal and the demon king's last words as his only clue, he will aimlessly explore the world of magic, sorcery, and wizardry to find the answer to a question...

"How should I live this life differently?"

Will he follow his heart? Or will he take a different path?

Rebirth: From Hero to commoner is a story about a naive hero who will uncover the secrets of a magically endowed world filled with humans, monsters, elves, dwarves, and many other creatures born with magic.

This story will be updated every Monday to Friday at 11:00:00 RR time.

I'm an inexperienced author and this is my first time writing a story so don't expect much from this story. (The cover is not official btw.)

Check out the advance chapters on myPatreon

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Mackie

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 36
Views: 21,556

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Community Reviews(3)

TosangRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Let jump straight to the review
The Story is Kinda old but that the charm : rebirth ,op ,magic sword. The pace is neither slow or fast.
Mc is op like i said , But he seem too young (from the world's point) for that . He kinda likeable and battle maniac ( a bit naive). Nothing much to talked about.
Others Characs seem fine .Not really much spotlights or defined traits.
The World seem vague ,not much too say .
Many Grammar/Spelling mistakes here and there but still readable.
Overall : This still a good book to read and relax .Hope my Wacky review Help. TFTNovel Author😇😇😇
JaysanerdRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Just read the first 5 chapters and the prologue so i'm basing this review off that.
I'll start with the prologue.
In my opinion, the prologue was amazing, It was my favorite chapter out of the 6 i've read! An intense battle between Grey and Satan, you really captured the emotions of the characters well and i'm almost even sad that we won't be seeing Satan again, he was really well written!
Unfortunately, there were some grammar mistakes, but i feel like the more you write, the less grammar mistakes you'll make!
The story may not be the most unique, but you gave it a nice personal touch making it worth reading, the title also fits the story so that's a plus!
The pacing is good, the scenes don't feel rushed or dragged out, giving me a natural reading experience!
Your characters are very consistent which is great, because nobody likes a character who's personality changes every other scene ^^
I also really like Grey's parents! (Gosh i hope they have a happy ending :D) But I personally didn't find their reaction to hearing their newborn baby speak to be very realistic, but that may just be me.
You do a good job ending each chapter leaving me to want to read the next chapter immedeately.
I look forward to the future of this fiction!
Rookie12Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This review is based on the five chapters that were available at the time, plus the prologue.
The story starts with really high stakes. Our MC, Grey, is busy fighting Satan in a battle that is bound to end with the demise of both, and sure enough, this is exactly what happens.
Not all is lost though, by some miracle or chance, Grey gets to be reborn in another world as an infant with all his memories intact. After spending his entire life for the sake of his monumental heroic deed, Grey now wants to try a different life and be a happy person for once. What more can he wish for, aside from already having a second chance and a loving family? Well, for once, he lost access to magic and now must find a way to gain it back along with his former abilities without sacrificing his happiness or his family. And on top of that, he still must grow up physically. His journey begins!
The style is good. Each scene lasts exactly as long as it needs to in order to paint the world for you.
There are some grammar mistakes, most of the story is written in the present tense. Still, it is easy to understand, the action is simple enough to visualize, and the story itself is captivating.
Characters. For now, they are good. There are a bit too few chapters to say how the plot will change in the future, but at the moment I want the MC to succeed and for his family to be happy. They are endearing, and I like it.
The worldbuilding, from what I read, is solid, with some hints a bit too obvious (Satan's last words, for example), but nonetheless intriguing.
All in all, the story is really good, it just needs a bit of work on the grammar.