Rebirth, but not quite.

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Description

A boy is born in a fantasy world with knowledge of modern earth, however he does not have personal memories of living or dying before.

Good news is he was born in militaristic branch of the royal family and the variety of forms and uses of magic in this world are great fun, bad news is with status come expectations.

Follow him as he makes his place in the world all the while escaping boredom with all his might.

This is a story without a big baddie trying to destroy the world, without gods choosing heroes to give powers to and without systems that determine what you can and can't do.

This is my first fiction and i'm open to suggestions. I plan on using a few cliches while putting my own spin on things, if i write something that feels too much like every other fictions, please say so.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019
Author
Lawkz

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICCOMEDYSUPERNATURALSLICE OF LIFESTRONG LEADMALE LEADKINGDOM BUILDINGREINCARNATIONHIGH FANTASY

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Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
130
Views
51,151

Chapters(29 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • Hephaestus0Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a great story with an interesting protagonist that is not violent unlike some stories on royalroad that make things like killing somebody just a little bit to easy. This does not mean that the main character is constantly talking about morals but at least the author spends a couple of sentences on it which is quite a good thing.
    An other good thing about this story is that it is not only focussed on fighting the next enemy or crafting the next (slightly better) weapon. The story actual allows the character to grow and explore the world. It should however be noted that as of chapter 13 it is stil realy clear that this is a slice of live story (which I quite like) with large crafting and some fighting elements.
    I have said some of the good things about this story but now I also have to mention some point that could use some improvement.
    An problem that this author has is that they sometimes make things look just a little bit to easy. I know for example that making high quality glas can be quite difficult but some people might like this because not everyone likes to hear all of the trial and error that is involved in making something new :).
    The last thing which is admittedly a difficult one is that the story jumps from one location/event to another quite suddenly. This is often a quite difficult thing to do correctly and it is not what I would call bad but at some points you do notice it. I do not know how this is usually fixed but like I said it is not really that bad.
    I would like to stress one last time that this really is a good story and if you like reincarnation, crafting and action than this is a very good choice for you.
  • obranRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Chilid is reborn with inborn knowledge of earth but no memories.  He is aware from birth and is treated as a kind of genius.  Lives in a matriarchy where his family is part of the military.
    This is a fairly standard reincarnation story, but it is a whole lot of fun so far.  It does borrow a lot from my own reincarnation fiction, but then immitation is the best form of flattery. Looking forward to reading more.
  • orandel garnettRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    it's good. its a slice of life story about a guy reborn in a world of magic just living his life as an noble who's part of the royal family.
    So far it doesn't strike anything i usally find as a minus in all the stories i've read before and im hoping it doesn't at least for in the near future.
    So far it hasn't:
    1. have all the side characters in the story be really stupid so that the mc somehow seems smarter than everyone else.(this is weak and just an easy way to neglect character development)
    2.Take itself to seriously.(i mean that theirs times when the author just jets so into something that you will literally have to read ten chapters of exposition just to get back to the main story)when no one really gives a fuck.
    3.Last but not least it's not some edgy trash where everythings shit or everyone has to have some tragic back story and so far i haven't seen a corroupt noble cliche so i think the main conflict gonna be about a war, but even if it isn't i'll still read.