Rebellious Rulu

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Due to drastic environmental changes, special humans known as "Ultra-capable" appeared in the world.

Fifty years later, the world's first nation established by the Ultra-capable—the "Sanctuary"—was born.

After the Sanctuary's establishment, it continuously absorbed Ultra-capable individuals and other talented people from around the world as citizens, while constantly waging wars against various nations.

With the extraordinary power of the Ultra-capable, the Sanctuary successfully defeated numerous countries, establishing settlement zones in these defeated nations and forcibly plundering resources.

Due to the Sanctuary's endless plundering and oppression, hatred toward the Sanctuary continued to spread among the people of various nations worldwide, and acts of resistance against the Sanctuary occurred constantly.

However, in the face of the Sanctuary's overwhelming power, these actions were meaningless. All resistance movements were crushed and suppressed, ending in complete failure.

In the blink of an eye, hundreds of years passed. The world remained subjugated under the Sanctuary's feet. Although a few people still resisted the Sanctuary at this time, no one believed the Sanctuary could be defeated anymore.

Nevertheless, there are always those who try to accomplish the impossible.

In some corner of the world, a young man with a special background, filled with hatred toward the Sanctuary, vows to destroy the Sanctuary and change the world...

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
Xhyl

Tags

MAGICSCI-FIMALE LEADSOFT SCI-FI

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.5/ 5.0
Followers
3
Views
24,369

Chapters(168 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • HvrdRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    This seems to be a "cultivator story" set in a modern world, similar to "Versatile Mage" or "Swallowed Star". I didn't really get far enough to see how they increase their power level, so I'm not quite sure. This is a genre that I have soft spot for, and this story seems to have potential.
    The early plot of this story is the main character joining a rebel group, with a personal hate against the ruling class, and with a future goal of destroying them. Didn't read far enough to know how the story develops.
    The MC seems very Lelouch inspired, as he is described to look similar and
    also gets what I'm pretty sure is the geass.
    I don't know if I could say he has the same genius though. That comes from the fact that the reader never really gets to know what he thinks. I read 27 chapters, and have no idea if there is a single thought in the MCs head that isn't a reaction to something happening right in front of him.
    I have three things that the author could improve. The first is the dialog. It kinda reads as you would expect of the generic chinese story translated into english, and often characters say things that just doesn't feel like any person would ever say. Examples of this is people describing situations where both characters know what's happening, but the reader doesn't. There is also just so much dialog. It could definitvely be shortened down.
    The second thing is that the story doesn't allow the reader any breaks. It jumps from action scene to action scene, without a break in between. There usually is a break in between action scenes to have an opportunity to get to know the characters, as well as giving the reader a break. In general, if something is always intense, it is not intense at all.
    The last thing is that we never get to know what the Mc is thinking or feeling. What is the MC feeling when his father figure dies? Is it only rage and a thirst for revenge? Is he feeling shock and disbelief, or is there some sadness and loss? What is the MC thinking of these