Re: Transport to Another World as My Game Character!
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
The stories about high school students. who asleep while his pc game still on.
When he wake up suddenly he was in a fantasy world as his game Character that, he playing for 4 years
#Warning!
Bad Grammar!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- HeiaN
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 42
- Views
- 20,359
Chapters(23 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Rabid FanRoyal Road★★ 1.5The Over Powered story where stats mean little to nothing as our intrepid MC follows the retarded molester route.
Good Points :story is original in a sense thats lucky , and it had elves and dragons thats a plus. MC develops a conscience ?
Bad Points :English needs a little patching up here and there nothing too drastically bad, Plot lines are delivered adhoc and make little to no sense. And worst of all so far the MC is more scum then saviour in any sense as the reasons for playing the game don't even garner positive feelings. Female characters don't seem to hold grudges for unsolicted groping.
There is much to be improved with how the story could be worded.
The bare bones story is at the very least starting to take shape.
I will continue reading this should it by some miracle survive to see the author work onward. - CiainaRoyal Road★ 0.5Or any other free grammar correctors. In 2019 there is no excuse for such a level of writing.
Use a crutch, learn through it.