Re:Serpent, the Struggles of a 'Snake' to Survive and Evolve...

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*Heyo, Evil Overlord here. As some may know, I am the main editor of VanZans, and his fiction, Those Who Aspire to Become Gods. If you do not know, check his work out and see for yourself. This is my first story to test my skills as a writer and a story teller. This may or may not be continued depending on my choice, and available time I have.*Hello, ghost audience, my name is Heibai. It stands for black and white in Chinese, and yes I am Asian, though I grew up in America. I was an orphan, now adopted into a rare family dojo in Chinatown in a certain state. Now I am reincarnated into a 'snake'...killed by a goddamn truck, conjured by fate's sick sense of entertainment, and died attempting to save my sister (she is not related by blood by the way) when I tried to shield her from harm, and here I am...in a new world, primitive, war-torn, and semi-corrupt. Disgusted by the contents of this fantasy world, I must survive and discover the truth to my sudden...rebirth...and find my sister if she is also here, human or not. My main goal of this story...is to fight on and learn as much as I can, and my secondary goal, to see if I can return home...human or NOT.*Might include blood and some gore

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: I4MD347H

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 792
Views: 261,036

Chapters(21 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

Ruin115Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I was a little tentative going in, as you said it's your first story, but I continued to get more engrossed as I read. Keep up the good work
First manga gamerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It really good but i hope u release more chapter faster or let us know if u dropped itbut please dont drop this novel it really goooooooooooooood
meddler88Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is so far pretty great. I like how the author is showing the emotional development of the Mc and I also like how he is showing the merging of his human memories and non human insticts. I look forward to more and I know that this story will reach the top ten in the next month. Along as the author can put out 4 chapters or more in a week.
superkamimarvinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It seems interesting so far but kinda slow.. 4 chapters and not even born yet
Only major complaint is I need more
walin7Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
ya a good story worth reading and really enjoying it
i just have one problem UPDATE!!!!!!!!
JustawayRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
i'm enjoying the story so far!
though i must say that though synopsis seems a whole lot like Those Who Aspired Gods it has some interesting differences!
keep the uploads coming
CrossXeroRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Piqued my interest so far so ill keep reading and then change my rating based on how it turns out.
Also when you display emotions it might be better if you were to do it before/after a sentence.
"Something something cheeky" As he grinned evilly
Smirking he responded "Something something etc"
instead of
"Something something *Evil Grin*" "Something something *Very Evil Smile*
Just a random opinion from me you can ignore though.