Re : Last survivor
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White Hazel is an international corporate executive who survived the World War. After a long wait, she finds herself awakening in a world where civilization has been rewritten.
A cruel world filled with mutated monsters, half-robotic biological beings, hidden truths, political games, and conspiracies.
Truth, fate and natural selection will determine who survives. The truth of the "Great Wall" theory will determine that only the strongest can make it through.
Will Hazel reach the top once again?
The story of a cold-blooded woman who knows only purpose above purpose. No matter the means, the mysterious world will be reconquered.
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Mature Content : R18
Genre: Dark Fantasy, Science, Villains, Action, Tragedy, Conspiracy, Horror (human body,lovecraft), Psychology, R18(Sexuality,Gore)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- GreedFoXNV
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 20
- Views
- 6,367
Chapters(26 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- MeniirRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The story has an interesting premise, I could even say that the premise is the reason I continued to read this. It has some sort of Mr. House vibe from Fallout: New Vegas, except instead of a couple of centuries had past since the great war (or the third world war as I assumed from this story), it takes place more than 100,000 years into the future. And except of a decaying, rotting man hooked into a computer controlling an army of robots, it's an ambitious woman that had been frozen in a cryo pod (Fallout 4 reference) with knowledge of a long-forgotten era of human history.
Style
The story is told in the perspective of the Main Character, who is the main driver of the story. There are a couple of flaws I noticed when I reread some parts, such as inconsistent pronouns when speaking to someone, though that was only in one chapter. Another thing are the conversations that seemingly do not indicate who is talking, which makes me reread it a couple of times to fully grasp it.
Grammar
Obviously, like me, the English is not the Author's first language. I could point out a couple of grammar mistakes and typos in the story, but not too much that it ruins the story-telling. I'm sure your brain could figure out the gaps by itself.
Story
The story is a bit of a slow burn, but that may be because of my personal preference. The Main Character is an ancient human from a long-forgotten era of human history that has been devastated by nuclear war, and woke up from her cryo chamber presumably after it malfunctions and unfreezes her more than 100,000 years into the future and into a world where human society regressed into the feudal age. Magic also exists, and its naming convention is based off a popular Chinese gacha game. (Which I'm sure where the Main Character's appearance takes direct inspiration from.)
There are some scenes, or chapter even, that shouldn't be there in the first place if it doesn't connect directly to the story.
The chapter where the Prince and Violet is descri - GpSir87Royal Road★★★★ 4.0So far so good,
I'm quite enjoying this novel, it's original and interesting making me want to continue reading.
It slowly builds up and gets better by each page and I see a lot of potential in this.
Keep up the great work and I'll follow you through this story, would love to see more.