Re:Insanity

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Description

Jeff became a test subject of a dark organization that specializes in doing inhumane experiments, enhancing human abilities and creating their own assassins. Day by day Jeff resisted the painful experimentation that was done to him to remain his sanity, but even if he clings to his sanity, his mind still developed an abnormal sense that kinda made him into a psychopath. When the day that he was about to be mind controlled by the organization to do an assassination. A strange phenomenon occurred in the lab. And this is the story of a man with a kind heart and a slight insane mind ————————————————————————————————————————— Hello guys J.Nashiro here, this is my first fiction so please feel free to rate if you want to but please don't be too harsh on me. Please note that English is not my native language so you might find some wrong grammars and spellings. Anyway, I hope that you enjoy this amateur's story.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: J.Nashiro

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 701
Views: 290,476

Chapters(27 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

AternusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good story and an enjoyable read. I like psychotic characters that aren't always evil but instead chaotic like they should be. Has been done before but still very interesting.
only negative and this is more for the author to read is that the interactions between characters sometimes feel a little awkward, though it improves as the story goes.
First manga gamerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Goood story bro please tey to make tis story different
Not one with bitches who dont show respact and they changes their mood very fast
kay.lensonRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
nice story can't wait for update and you are not gonna say you dropped it..
IronDragonRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
its just starting off i hope the author can pull off consistently entertaining insanity
SyluxRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It seems interessting and worth reading, keep it up.
HaeruRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Good concept with a few problems. The grammar needs some tweaking and the writing seems to lack a perfect ‘flow’ but I suppose that it will be fixed with experience.
LVL. 1 SUBSIDYRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Story idea is good, but the dialogue is a bit bland... And the Main Character is a tipsy bit cliché... The cliché bad guy wannabe type of character. But regardless, its still a fun read if your trying to pass some time.
PS. A lot of scenes that are straight up cliché... could've been executed much more better if you put more thought into it.
MattajRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
This story has a potential but I found few issues like not enough descriptions or too much of them. Grammar is also annoying from time to time (e.g. repetitions of words, using nouns instead of adjectives, etc.).
Interaction between characters is not the best but characters themselves have been alright. I know that you did not give more information on how to use status for your MC but you could at least let us compare him with people he met other than bandits and girls at the beginning. One thing about characters interactions (mostly in chapter 9) that does not make much sense is- why did they not even try to kill him after binding him? It does not make any sense. Or how he does not have any knowledge on status and game like features when he should know them because of his experience before abduction (your first side story).
I expected something more from this story but I got disappointed. I hope you can work on use of words and give a bit more depth to your world.
I will check this story in few weeks or months and see if you improved and made it interesting or stayed the same and I will update my review.
PS. I usually do not leave reviews (and the ones I leave may not be the best) but I really expected so much after reading the beginning of the story and the disappointment (after arriving at chapter 9) was overwhelming.