Re:Hammer

Self-Published

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Description

Your average Reborn Game System story, similar to The Gamer and Solo Leveling. Written for fun rather than novilization like the others, so it is smaller and less intense. It is set in an AU Warhammer (based on a slightly modified version of Warhammer Fantasy's End Times. (Modified because the real setting was a catastrophe. There will be no exploding moons or beating the God Of Indulgence because they overindulged, and no Slaans fucking off to space. People shall use their brains and not just "lol cuz I can" bs like Todbringer thinking the end of the fucking world was the best time to go persue you interracial Yaoi rivalry with a Beastlord). So you might notice names and events but don't expect it all to go the same way. And the Main Character is not the only Player in this game~

Sequel found here.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/26444/rehammer-the-hammering

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019
Author
LillyanaKabal

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFEMALE LEADSUPERNATURALSTRONG LEADREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.8/ 5.0
Followers
485
Views
205,820

Chapters(60 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • ObscureReferenceRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The author of this story listen to the community, makes changes when necessary, and still maintains their own creative liberty. At this point, they should pretty much be a goddamn superhero!
    Thanks for listening,
    Obscure Reference
  • TechmanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Apparently the system is based off of the Warhammer games. I've never done anything with them and I still really enjoy this story.
    Well written with engaging style, interesting characters, and good grammar and spelling. MC is on their way to becoming OP, but it's an enjoyable ride rather than boring steamrolling of everything. I recommend.
  • ChillingbearRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    There are never enough Warhammer fics in my opinion. It is a gritty world filled with some of the most badass heroes I have ever read.
  • Lar25xRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Good storytelling new type of warhammer storyline
  • TazKhaelyorRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    While not perfect, I found it highly enjoyable and I encourage you to give it a read.
    For a more detailed review :
    - Taking a classic setting and coming back to it with such a twist was a great idea IMHO and is the main appeal of this story to me.
    - While I found the writing effective for the most part, the pacing was often a bit jarring at some points. Just changing a bit the transition between sets could be enough to solve that though.
    - Minimalist and classic LitRPG system, serves the story and doesn't get in the way, even if I may have enjoyed some more depths to it.
    - The main characters could have benefitted from a bit more attention and development too, but even without that their motivations are clear for the most part and they are at least consistent and not some tropes incarnate.
    And even with that said, I would still give it a 5 star review, if not for the "Druchii arc" which felt like it threw a wrench not only in the tone, story and pacing, but also the MC development and caracteristics. It feels like it appears out of nowhere without rime, reason or explanation, turns what the entire story so far has been on its head and conflicts with pretty much everything up to that point in ~3-5 chapters. The rest of the arc feels more like damage control to get things back on track than anything else, but at least succeed at that.
    I would love to read the parallel universe version where the skaven arc was instead chosen, but I still want to applaud and thank the autor for sticking to it even with the added difficulties and bringing this story to a satisfying conclusion despite that "mistake".
  • roceilRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    MC kills someone then becomes a slave, not the best way to do a transition.
  • LandiRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    The beginning was ok. Then out of the blue someone hits the light out of you, and you end up reading another novel for all it's worth.
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    The protagonist ends up in love with her rapist and slaver. Cuz`
    Stockholm Syndrome? Brainwashing? Hey your tormentor has feelings too! And i'm sure she feels the same way. Cuz` who wouldn't love a pet?! Only psychopaths and demon worshipers wouldn't.
    Enough with the rant. Truly my fault for reading a FanFiction, but you can't gliss on worldbuilding and lore so much.
  • ParesseRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    SPOILER WARNING
    I have been on a binge of LitRPG novels recently, and I came upon this one. Now this novel really was the kinda cliche of something extraordinary happens, and then the MC gains a system by either an unknown entity of so called "God", but the development and uniqueness the story showed was very much appreciated by myself. Then, I got to the "m" arc, where suddenly the MC gets captured and abused/raped by her capturer. So, I was thinking alright I'm not really a big fan of the MC who is supposed to be able to overcome adversity and escape for peril heroically, get captured and humiliated. But, if its pulled off well no harm done, but then some bullshit reasons were given for her capture like she was sold out by her comrades. Like come on,  she was just recognized as a HERO of the empire and promoted to a prestigious position; some half-hearted excuse like that doesn't fit the society that this world takes place in. Then during her capture she suddenly gains Stockholm syndrome on the first damn day from some fondling, like seriously. Then she gets married to her capturer, which is so unbelievable to her personality. Just a couple chapters earlier she almost died trying to get revenge on someone who killed her, even though there was some benefit to her death, and now she falls in love with the person who admitted they manipulated her, raped her, and owns her. This just pissed me off so much I dropped the novel right then and there. So, read this novel if you love BS reasons for a pointless marriage to an annoying character who should have died within a few chapters of her appearance.
  • HelixicalRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    I suspect the author gets some sort of sick, twisted enjoyment out of getting people to enjoy his story and characters and then BOOM! RAPE OUTTA NOWHERE.
  • ArtjomRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    That was the worst story have read here.
    The Potential of the beginning is not only wasted, it was ritualistic slaughtered. This is the worst lesbian power fantasy I have ever read and is a insult to the setting. This is worse than the end times. You somehow fucked the setting worse than games workshop. If I could sue you for the time I have waste reading this, I would.
    THIS IS SHIT. IT'S LIKE DIARRHEA AND BLOOD.