Rad-city

Self-Published

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Description

What does humanity mean? Was the world always the same? The powers are known as cosmium, what's the source of it? There are tons of questions arousing in a world where people and artificial intelligence are coexisting to fight human needs and issues. At least it seems this way. But what may seem might not be always true. It's the tip of the iceberg. This world has its tale, a dark one. Just to run along the flow, Ayesha and her friends set off to become nightingales, certified heroes who put their lives on the line to make the world a better place. But the corruption, the true reason for everything happening and the motive of higher classes would question everyoneAM I REALLY THE HERO?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Rezwan Ahmed Ovi

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 7
Views: 5,687

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Community Reviews(3)

Reaper5009Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It is interesting.
The plot at first glance seemed generic but it's getting turns. Especially as the main characters are getting annihilated is hardly expected but it doesn't weakens the plot
The idea of holding fans with foreshadowing works too.
I really hope the serious part starts soon.
Expecting the plot to turn out good.
Good luck.
loaf of cheezRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Damn. It's interesting. I love how you are building up the story. But your grammar could be better, I hope you can work on it. The characters are getting built and I hope you won't dissapoint us.Characters like Ayesha,Musa nd Brock has so much potential. The writing style is not exclusively unique but loved it. The action genre writing style is awesome. The thrills are not bad either. The description of character's looks really helps to visulaize and imagine the character. So this my honest rating. And I really liked how you hinted about some upcoming events. It is gonna hold up readers I hope. The bounty hunt really sets up as a good starting. Little bit dissapointed to let go of characters like Musa and Ron so quickly. Musa's backstory was decent. Hints of Ayesha's backstory are hyping. Overall it's great Hoping a great fiction from you.
Here are some suggestions
1.Add more major characters
2.some chapters are just becoming too small. You lengthen it up.
3.The main advice is upload chapter bit more regularly. You are bit irregular.
4.The synopsis should be updated. It feels like some simple super natural story synopsis.
Good luck with Rad-city. It just gets better and better!
S.nufflesRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
So far I really like the ideas around the story taking place around a group of academia students. It's definitely inspired but not in the bad sense and it has a lot of potential to grow into something with unexpectedly high stakes. Good job!
There are a few issues with grammar but I think that steps have been taken to improve this which is always a good sign. Since there's so many chapters, binge readers can expect there to be a story progression ready and waiting!
The world and the sense of higher powers at play got me at this early stage which I write this review, so I recommend you give it a chance.